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sethmanheim · sethmanheim · commit 92f971b05f80 · 2025-02-24T13:04:22.000-08:00
diff --git a/azure-local/manage/register-windows-admin-center.md b/azure-local/manage/register-windows-admin-center.md
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ There are several requirements and things to consider before you begin the regis
 
 - If your network is configured to use a proxy server for internet connection, make sure that you configure the proxy settings on the Windows Admin Center settings. After the proxy settings are configured, to avoid registration failures restart the **ServerManagementGateway** (Windows Admin Center) service on the server running Windows Admin Center before proceeding with Microsoft Entra registration.
 
-- Unless you're a Microsoft Entra admin or you have an existing Azure application ID, you need to contact your Microsoft Entra admin to either provide an existing Azure application ID or [grant consent to a new application ID](#grant-consent-to-a-new-azure-application-id) that you'll create as part of the registration process.
+- Unless you're a Microsoft Entra admin or you have an existing Azure application ID, you must contact your Microsoft Entra admin to either provide an existing Azure application ID or [grant consent to a new application ID](#grant-consent-to-a-new-azure-application-id) that you create as part of the registration process.
 
 ## How to register Windows Admin Center with Azure
 
@@ -53,15 +53,15 @@ Follow these one-time registration steps in the registration pane to register Wi
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/register-windows-admin-center/enter-code.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Enter code window." lightbox="media/register-windows-admin-center/enter-code.png":::
 
-   After pasting in the code, an interactive **Sign in** window appears. Enter the email address associated with the Azure account you want to use with Windows Admin Center. The exact prompts that you see varies depending on your security settings (for example, two-factor authentication). Follow the prompts to sign in.
+   After pasting in the code, an interactive **Sign in** window appears. Enter the email address associated with the Azure account you want to use with Windows Admin Center. The exact prompts that you see vary depending on your security settings; for example, two-factor authentication. Follow the prompts to sign in.
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/register-windows-admin-center/sign-in.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the sign in dialog box." lightbox="media/register-windows-admin-center/sign-in.png":::
 
-   After signing in, you get a confirmation that you're signed into the Windows Admin Center application on your device. Close the confirmation window and return to the original registration page.
+   After you sign in, you get a confirmation that you're signed into the Windows Admin Center application on your device. Close the confirmation window and return to the original registration page.
 
-1. Connect to Microsoft Entra ID by supplying your Microsoft Entra ID (tenant) ID and application ID. If you already have an Azure tenant ID and you've completed the preceding steps, the tenant ID dropdown may be pre-populated and may contain multiple options. Select the correct tenant ID.
+1. Connect to Microsoft Entra ID by supplying your Microsoft Entra ID (tenant) ID and application ID. If you already have an Azure tenant ID and you completed the preceding steps, the tenant ID dropdown may be pre-populated and may contain multiple options. Select the correct tenant ID.
 
-   - If your Microsoft Entra administrator has provided you with an application ID, select **Use existing** and enter the application ID.
+   - If your Microsoft Entra administrator provided you with an application ID, select **Use existing** and enter the application ID.
 
    - If you have an existing ID but don't know what it is, follow the steps described in [Get tenant and app ID values for signing in](/azure/active-directory/develop/howto-create-service-principal-portal#get-tenant-and-app-id-values-for-signing-in) to retrieve it.
 
@@ -77,14 +77,14 @@ Follow these one-time registration steps in the registration pane to register Wi
 
 1. Select **Sign in** to sign into your Azure account.
    > [!NOTE]
-   > If you get a notice that you need admin approval, it might be because the Microsoft Entra admin must grant permissions in the Azure portal, as described in [Grant consent to the new Azure application ID](#grant-consent-to-a-new-azure-application-id). If they've already done that and you're still getting the notice, try refreshing Windows Admin Center and signing in again by going to **Settings** > **Account**.
+   > If you get a notice that you need admin approval, it might be because the Microsoft Entra admin must grant permissions in the Azure portal, as described in [Grant consent to the new Azure application ID](#grant-consent-to-a-new-azure-application-id). If they already did that and you're still getting the notice, try refreshing Windows Admin Center and signing in again by going to **Settings** > **Account**.
 
 After Windows Admin Center is registered with Azure, you're ready to [register Azure Stack HCI with Azure](../deploy/register-with-azure.md).
 
 ## Grant consent to a new Azure application ID
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> This procedure applies only if you a Microsoft Entra admin.
+> This procedure applies only if you are a Microsoft Entra admin.
 
 If you're a Microsoft Entra admin, follow these steps to grant consent to a new Azure application ID:
 
@@ -104,12 +104,12 @@ If you're a Microsoft Entra admin, follow these steps to grant consent to a new
 
    1. While still viewing the app registration in the Azure portal for the Windows Admin Center instance you're registering, select **Authentication** under **Manage** from the left pane.
 
-   1. In the **Redirect URIs** box, you will see an existing URI representing the first Windows Admin Center system that registered to the app ID. Select **Add URI** and add two new redirect URIs: `http://localhost:6516` and `https://localhost:6516`. Select **Save.**
+   1. The **Redirect URIs** box shows an existing URI representing the first Windows Admin Center system that registered to the app ID. Select **Add URI** and add two new redirect URIs: `http://localhost:6516` and `https://localhost:6516`. Select **Save.**
 
       :::image type="content" source="media/register-windows-admin-center/add-redirect-uris.png" alt-text="To enable multiple users in an organization to register Windows Admin Center using the same Azure app ID, add redirect URIs" lightbox="media/register-windows-admin-center/add-redirect-uris.png":::
 
    > [!IMPORTANT]
-   > Make sure to provide your users with the correct Azure tenant ID and the application ID from step 5, and tell them to select **Use existing** application ID when registering Windows Admin Center. Note that if a Microsoft Entra admin doesn't add redirect URIs and more than one user tries to register Windows Admin Center to the same app ID, they will get an error that the reply URL doesn't match.
+   > Make sure to provide your users with the correct Azure tenant ID and the application ID from step 5, and tell them to select **Use existing** application ID when registering Windows Admin Center. Note that if a Microsoft Entra admin doesn't add redirect URIs and more than one user tries to register Windows Admin Center to the same app ID, they get an error that the reply URL doesn't match.
 
 ## Unregister Windows Admin Center
 
