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Author: ronmiab

azure-local/manage/virtual-machine-image-centos.md

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ This article describes how to use Azure CLI to prepare a CentOS Linux image and
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - Have access to an Azure Local instance that is deployed, registered, and connected to Azure Arc. Go to the **Overview** page in the Azure Local resource. On the **Server** tab on the right pane, **Azure Arc** should appear as **Connected**.
-- [Download the latest supported ISO image](http://repo1.sea.innoscale.net/centos/7.9.2009/isos/x86_64/) on your Azure Local instance. Here, we downloaded the *CentOS-7-x86_64-Everything-2207-02.iso* file. You use this image to create a VM image.
+- [Download the latest supported ISO image](http://repo1.sea.innoscale.net/centos/7.9.2009/isos/x86_64/) on your Azure Local instance. Here, we downloaded the *CentOS-7-x86_64-Everything-2207-02.iso* file.
 
 ## Workflow
 
@@ -39,12 +39,12 @@ The following sections provide detailed instructions for each step in the workfl
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 >
-> - Do not use a virtual hard disk from an Azure virtual machine to prepare the Azure Local VM image.
+> - Do not use a virtual hard disk from an Azure VM to prepare the Azure Local VM image.
 > - We recommend that you prepare a CentOS image if you intend to enable guest management on the VMs.
 
 ### Step 1: Create a CentOS VM
 
-Use the downloaded CentOS image to create a virtual machine on your Azure Local instance and follow these steps:
+Use the downloaded CentOS image to create a VM on your Azure Local instance and follow these steps:
 
 1. Set up the VM with the following specifications:
     1. Provide a friendly name for your VM.

azure-local/manage/virtual-machine-image-linux-sysprep.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ This article describes how to use Azure CLI to prepare an Ubuntu image and creat
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - Have access to an Azure Local instance. This system is deployed, registered, and connected to Azure Arc. Go to the **Overview** page in the Azure Local resource. On the **Server** tab on the right pane, **Azure Arc** should appear as **Connected**.
-- [Download the latest supported Ubuntu server image](https://ubuntu.com/download/server) on your Azure Local system. The supported OS versions are *Ubuntu 20.04*, *22.04*, and *24.04 LTS*. You prepare this image to create an Azure Local VM image.
+- [Download the latest supported Ubuntu server image](https://ubuntu.com/download/server) on your Azure Local system. The supported OS versions are *Ubuntu 20.04*, *22.04*, and *24.04 LTS*.
 
 ## Workflow
 
@@ -35,19 +35,19 @@ The following sections provide detailed instructions for each step in the workfl
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 >
-> - Do not use a virtual hard disk from an Azure virtual machine to prepare the Azure Local VM image.
+> - Do not use a virtual hard disk from an Azure VM to prepare the Azure Local VM image.
 > - We recommend that you prepare an Ubuntu image if you intend to enable guest management on the VMs.
 
 ### Step 1: Create an Ubuntu VM
 
-Use the downloaded Ubuntu image to create a virtual machine on your Azure Local instance and follow these steps:
+Use the downloaded Ubuntu image to create a VM on your Azure Local instance and follow these steps:
 
 1. Set up the VM with the following specifications:
     1. Provide a friendly name for your VM.
 
         :::image type="content" source="../manage/media/virtual-machine-image-linux-sysprep/ubuntu-virtual-machine-name.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the New Virtual Machine Wizard on the Specify Name and Location page." lightbox="../manage/media/virtual-machine-image-linux-sysprep/ubuntu-virtual-machine-name.png":::
 
-    1. Specify **Generation 2** for your VM as you're working with a VHDX image here.
+    1. Specify **Generation 2** for your VM as you're working with a virtual hard disk v2 (VHDX) image here.
 
         :::image type="content" source="../manage/media/virtual-machine-image-linux-sysprep/ubuntu-virtual-machine-generation.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the New Virtual Machine Wizard on the Specify Generation page." lightbox="../manage/media/virtual-machine-image-linux-sysprep/ubuntu-virtual-machine-generation.png":::
 

azure-local/manage/virtual-machine-image-red-hat-enterprise.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ This article describes how to use Azure CLI to prepare a Red Hat Enterprise Linu
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - Have access to an Azure Local instance. This system is deployed, registered, and connected to Azure Arc. Go to the **Overview** page in the Azure Local resource. On the **Server** tab on the right pane, **Azure Arc** should appear as **Connected**.
-- [Download the latest supported Red Hat Enterprise server image](https://developers.redhat.com/products/rhel/download#rhel-new-product-download-list-61451) on your Azure Local instance. We support all Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7.x, 8.x, and 9.x versions. Here, we downloaded the *rhel-9.4-x86_64-boot.iso* file. You use this image to create a VM image.
+- [Download the latest supported Red Hat Enterprise server image](https://developers.redhat.com/products/rhel/download#rhel-new-product-download-list-61451) on your Azure Local instance. We support all Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7.x, 8.x, and 9.x versions. Here, we downloaded the *rhel-9.4-x86_64-boot.iso* file.
 
 ## Workflow
 
@@ -36,22 +36,21 @@ The following sections provide detailed instructions for each step in the workfl
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 >
-> - Do not use a virtual hard disk from an Azure virtual machine to prepare the Azure Local VM image.
+> - Do not use a virtual hard disk from an Azure VM to prepare the Azure Local VM image.
 > - We recommend that you prepare a Red Hat Enterprise image if you intend to enable guest management on the VMs.
 
 Follow these steps on your Azure Local system to create a VM image by using the Azure CLI.
 
 ### Step 1: Create a Red Hat Enterprise VM
 
-To use the downloaded Red Hat Enterprise image to provision a VM:
-
-1. Use the downloaded image to create a VM with the following specifications:
+Use the downloaded Red Hat Enterprise image to create a VM on your Azure Local instance and follow these steps:
 
+1. Set up the VM with the following specifications:
     1. Provide a friendly name for your VM.
 
         :::image type="content" source="../manage/media/virtual-machine-image-red-hat-enterprise/red-hat-virtual-machine-name-and-location.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the New Virtual Machine Wizard on the Specify Name and Location page." lightbox="../manage/media/virtual-machine-image-red-hat-enterprise/red-hat-virtual-machine-name-and-location.png":::
 
-    1. Specify **Generation 2** for your VM as you're working with a VHDX image here.
+    1. Specify **Generation 2** for your VM as you're working with a virtual hard disk v2 (VHDX) image here.
 
         :::image type="content" source="../manage/media/virtual-machine-image-red-hat-enterprise/red-hat-virtual-machine-generation.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the New Virtual Machine Wizard on the Specify Generation page." lightbox="../manage/media/virtual-machine-image-red-hat-enterprise/red-hat-virtual-machine-generation.png":::
 

azure-local/manage/virtual-machine-image-suse.md

@@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ This article describes how to use Azure CLI to prepare an SUSE Linux image and c
 
 ## Workflow
 
-To convert the QCOW2 image to VHDX and create an Azure Local VM image from the VHDX image:
+To convert the QCOW2 image to a virtual hard disk v2 (VHDX) and create an Azure Local VM image from the VHDX image:
 
 1. [Convert QCOW2 to VHDX](#step-1-convert-qcow2-to-vhdx).
 2. [Create a SUSE VM image](#step-2-create-a-suse-vm-image).
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> Do not use an Azure Virtual Machine VHD disk to prepare the Azure Local VM image.
+> Do not use an Azure VM VHD disk to prepare the Azure Local VM image.
 
 The following sections provide detailed instructions for each step in the workflow.