edit pass: azure-arc-vm-management

Author: ShawnJackson

azure-local/manage/azure-arc-vm-management-overview.md

@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@ In this release, the Azure Arc VM management workflow is as follows:
 1. During your deployment of Azure Local, one Azure Arc resource bridge is installed per cluster. A custom location is also created.
 1. You [assign built-in RBAC roles for Azure Arc VM management](./assign-vm-rbac-roles.md).
 1. You create VM resources such as:
-    - [Storage paths](./create-storage-path.md) for VM disks.
-    - VM images, starting with an image in [Azure Marketplace](./virtual-machine-image-azure-marketplace.md), in an [Azure Storage account](./virtual-machine-image-storage-account.md), or in a [local share](./virtual-machine-image-local-share.md). These images are then used with other VM resources to create VMs.
-    - [Logical networks](./create-virtual-networks.md).  
-    - [VM network interfaces](./create-network-interfaces.md).
+    1. [Storage paths](./create-storage-path.md) for VM disks.
+    1. VM images, starting with an image in [Azure Marketplace](./virtual-machine-image-azure-marketplace.md), in an [Azure Storage account](./virtual-machine-image-storage-account.md), or in a [local share](./virtual-machine-image-local-share.md). These images are then used with other VM resources to create VMs.
+    1. [Logical networks](./create-virtual-networks.md).  
+    1. [VM network interfaces](./create-network-interfaces.md).
 1. You use the VM resources to [create VMs](./create-arc-virtual-machines.md).
 
 To troubleshoot problems with your Azure Arc VMs or to learn about known issues and limitations, see [Troubleshoot Azure Arc VM management for Azure Local](troubleshoot-arc-enabled-vms.md).

azure-local/manage/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.date: 01/14/2025
 
 [!INCLUDE [hci-applies-to-23h2](../includes/hci-applies-to-23h2.md)]
 
-After you deploy Azure Arc virtual machines (VMs), you might need to manage the VMs by adding or deleting resources such as data disks and network interfaces. This article describes how to manage these VM resources for an Azure Arc VM running on your Azure Local instance.
+After you deploy Azure Arc virtual machines (VMs), you might need to add or delete resources such as data disks and network interfaces. This article describes how to manage these VM resources for an Azure Arc VM running on your Azure Local instance.
 
 You can add or delete the resources by using the Azure portal. For the task of adding a data disk, you can also use the Azure CLI.
 

azure-local/manage/manage-arc-virtual-machines.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Manage Arc VMs on Azure Local
-description: Learn how to manage Arc VMs, including operations such as start, stop, restart, and view properties of Azure Arc VMs running on Azure Local version 23H2.
+description: Learn how to manage Arc VMs, including operations such as start, stop, restart, and view properties of Azure Arc VMs running on Azure Local, version 23H2.
 author: alkohli
 ms.author: alkohli
 ms.topic: how-to
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.date: 01/15/2025
 
 [!INCLUDE [hci-applies-to-23h2](../includes/hci-applies-to-23h2.md)]
 
-This article describes how to manage Azure Arc virtual machines (VMs) running on Azure Local version 23H2. It covers the procedures to enable guest management and to start, stop, restart, pause, save, and delete an Azure Arc VM.
+This article describes how to manage Azure Arc virtual machines (VMs) running on Azure Local, version 23H2. It covers the procedures to enable guest management and to start, stop, restart, pause, save, and delete an Azure Arc VM.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ When you enable guest management on an Azure Arc VM, the guest agent installs th
 
 Here are some key considerations for enabling guest management on a VM after you provision it:
 
-- Make sure that your Azure Local instance is running 2311 or later.
+- Make sure that your Azure Local instance is running 2311.2 or later.
 - Enabling guest management after VM provisioning isn't supported for Windows Server 2012 and Windows Server 2012 R2.
 - The steps to enable guest management differ based on whether a guest agent is running on your Azure Arc VM.