Updated with suggestions from Alpa.

Author: LouisBerner

azure-local/includes/hci-arc-vm-windows-admin-center.md

@@ -7,4 +7,4 @@ ms.author: alkohli
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 > [!NOTE]
-> The recommended way to create and manage VMs on Azure Local is using the [What is Azure Local VM management?](../manage/azure-arc-vm-management-overview.md). However, since the functionality described in this article is not yet provided by Azure Local, you can use Windows Admin Center or PowerShell as described below. Note that VMs created this way aren't Arc-enabled VMs. They have limited manageability from the Azure Arc control plane and fewer Azure Hybrid Benefits, such as no free use of Azure Update Manager.
+> The recommended way to create and manage VMs on Azure Local is using the [Azure Arc control plane](../manage/azure-arc-vm-management-overview.md). However, since the functionality described in this article is not yet provided by Azure Arc, you can use Windows Admin Center or PowerShell as described below. Note that VMs created this way aren't Arc-enabled VMs. They have limited manageability from the Azure Arc control plane and fewer Azure Hybrid Benefits, such as no free use of Azure Update Manager.

azure-local/manage/connect-arc-vm-using-ssh.md

@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
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-title: Connect to an Azure Local VM using SSH
-description: Learn how to use SSH to connect to an Azure Local VM.
+title: Connect to an Azure Local virtual machine (VM) using SSH
+description: Learn how to use SSH to connect to an Azure Local VM enabled by Azure Arc.
 author: alkohli
 ms.author: alkohli
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.service: azure-local
-ms.date: 03/25/2025
+ms.date: 04/04/2025
 
 #customer intent: As a Senior Content Developer, I want to provide customers with the highest level of content for using disconneced operations to deploy and manage their Azure Local instances.
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@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ ms.date: 03/25/2025
 
 [!INCLUDE [hci-applies-to-23h2](../includes/hci-applies-to-23h2.md)]
 
-This article provides an example to connect to an Azure Local VM using Secure Shell (SSH) and Remote Desktop (RDP) over SSH. The example demonstrates enabling the OpenSSH Server via the Arc Extension using Azure portal and Azure CLI.
+This article provides an example to connect to an Azure Local VM using Secure Shell (SSH) and Remote Desktop (RDP) over SSH. The example demonstrates enabling the OpenSSH Server via the Arc extension using Azure portal and Azure CLI.
 
-## More about the SSH Server Extension
+## About SSH Server extension
 
 You can open an RDP connection to every Windows Server from the Azure CLI without a VPN or another open port through your firewall. For more information, see [SSH access to Azure Arc-enabled servers](/azure/azure-arc/servers/ssh-arc-overview?tabs=azure-cli).
 

azure-local/manage/trusted-launch-automatic-state-transfer.md

@@ -5,20 +5,20 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 author: alkohli
 ms.author: alkohli
 ms.service: azure-local
-ms.date: 03/25/2025
+ms.date: 04/04/2025
 ---
 
-# Automatic transfer of virtual TPM state for Trusted launch VMs on Azure Local enabled by Azure Arc
+# Automatic transfer of virtual TPM state for Trusted launch for Azure Local VMS
 
 [!INCLUDE [applies-to](../includes/hci-applies-to-23h2.md)]
 
-This article uses an example to illustrate the automatic transfer of virtual TPM (vTPM) state in the case of Trusted launch for Azure Local VMs enabled by Azure Arc, even as the VM migrates or fails over to another machine in the system. This operation allows the applications that use the vTPM to function normally during VM migration or fail over.
+This article uses an example to illustrate the automatic transfer of virtual TPM (vTPM) state for Trusted launch for Azure Local VM, even as the VM migrates or fails over to another machine in the system. This operation allows the applications that use the vTPM to function normally during VM migration or failover.
 
 ## Example
 
 This example shows a Trusted launch for Azure Local VM running Windows 11 guest with BitLocker encryption enabled. Here are the steps to run this example:
 
-1. Create a Trusted launch for Azure Local VM running a supported Windows 11 guest operating system (OS).
+1. Create an Azure Local Trusted launch VM running a supported Windows 11 guest operating system (OS).
 
 1. Enable BitLocker encryption for the OS volume on the Win 11 guest. Sign on to the Windows 11 guest and enable BitLocker encryption for the OS volume: