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defender-for-iot/whats-new.md

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 ### New Device Category Added – Building Management Systems (BMS)
 
-A new device category has been added to the MDIoT license. The BMS category is specifically for building management systems and automation that aim to use to improve and tailor BMS device discovery and security. The BMS category includes a subset of Smart Facility and Surveillance devices (previously under the IoT category) such as fire alarms, humidity sensors, security radars, etc. These devices will now require an Microsoft Defender for IoT site-based license for full protection.
+A new BMS device category has been added to the MDIoT license aiming to improve BMS device discovery and security. The BMS category includes a subset of Smart Facility and Surveillance devices (previously under the IoT category) such as fire alarms, humidity sensors, security radars, etc. These devices now require an Microsoft Defender for IoT site-based license for full protection.
 
-Cameras devices will remain under IoT category.
+Cameras devices will remain under the IoT category.
 
 For more information, see [overview of device discovery](device-discovery.md).