Learn Editor: Update mac-whatsnew.md

Author: YongRhee-MSFT

defender-endpoint/mac-whatsnew.md

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 > [!NOTE]
 - Apple fixed an issue on macOS [Ventura upgrade](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/macos-release-notes/macos-13_1-release-notes), and [Sonoma upgrade](https://developer.apple.com/forums/thread/737824#773449022) with the latest OS update. The issue impacts Microsoft Defender for Endpoint security extensions, and might result in losing Full Disk Access Authorization, impacting its ability to function properly.
 - In macOS Sonoma 14.3.1, Apple made a change to the [handling of Bluetooth devices](https://developer.apple.com/forums/thread/738748) that impacts Defender for Endpoint device controls ability to intercept and block access to Bluetooth devices.  At this time, the recommended mitigation is to use a version of macOS less than 14.3.1.
-> - In macOS Sequoia, if you have Network Protection enabled, you might see crashes of the network extension (NetExt). This will result in intermittent network connectivity issues for end-users. We are recommending that customers who have Network Protection enabled in their organization refrain from upgrading to Sequoia builds at this time.
+> - In macOS Sequoia (version 15.0), if you have Network Protection enabled, you might see crashes of the network extension (NetExt). This will result in intermittent network connectivity issues for end-users. We are recommending that customers who have Network Protection enabled in their organization refrain from upgrading to Sequoia builds at this time.
 **Sequoia support**
 
-Microsoft Defender is working with Apple to provide our mutual customers, Microsoft Defender for Endpoint - Network Protection capabilities on macOS Sequoia (15).
+Microsoft Defender is collaborating with Apple to provide our mutual customers a solution when Network Protection is enabled in Microsoft Defender for Endpoint on macOS Sequoia (version 15.0).
 
 **macOS Deprecation**