Update linux-install-manually.md

Author: emmwalshh

defender-endpoint/linux-install-manually.md

@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ Download the onboarding package from Microsoft Defender portal.
    > To run this command, you must have `python` or `python3` installed on the device depending on the distro and version. If needed, see [Step-by-step Instructions for Installing Python on Linux](https://opensource.com/article/20/4/install-python-linux).
 
    > [!NOTE]
-   > To onboard a device that was previously offboarded you must remove the mdatp_offboard.json file located at /etc/opt/microsoft/mdatp.
+   > To onboard a device that was previously offboard, you must remove the mdatp_offboard.json file located at /etc/opt/microsoft/mdatp.
 
    If you're running RHEL 8.x or Ubuntu 20.04 or higher, you need to use `python3`.
 
@@ -221,11 +221,11 @@ Download the onboarding package from Microsoft Defender portal.
    ```
 
    > [!IMPORTANT]
-   > When the product starts for the first time, it downloads the latest anti-malware definitions. This process may take up to a few minutes depending on the network connectivity. During this time, the command mentioned earlier returns a value of `false`. You can check the status of the definition update using the following command:
+   > When the product starts for the first time, it downloads the latest anti-malware definitions. This process might take up to a few minutes depending on the network connectivity. During this time, the command mentioned earlier returns a value of `false`. You can check the status of the definition update using the following command:
    >
    > `mdatp health --field definitions_status`
    >
-   > Note that you may also need to configure a proxy after completing the initial installation. See [Configure Defender for Endpoint on Linux for static proxy discovery: Post-installation configuration](linux-static-proxy-configuration.md#post-installation-configuration).
+   > You might also need to configure a proxy after completing the initial installation. See [Configure Defender for Endpoint on Linux for static proxy discovery: Post-installation configuration](linux-static-proxy-configuration.md#post-installation-configuration).
 
 1. Run an AV detection test to verify that the device is properly onboarded and reporting to the service. Perform the following steps on the newly onboarded device:
 
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ The following external package dependencies exist for the mdatp package:
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Starting with version `101.24082.0004`, Defender for Endpoint on Linux no longer supports the `Auditd` event provider. We're transitioning completely to the more efficient eBPF technology.
-> If eBPF is not supported on your machines, or if there are specific requirements to remain on Auditd, and your machines are using Defender for Endpoint on Linux version `101.24072.0001` or lower, the following other dependencies on the auditd package exist for mdatp:
+> If eBPF isn't supported on your machines, or if there are specific requirements to remain on Auditd, and your machines are using Defender for Endpoint on Linux version `101.24072.0001` or lower, the following other dependencies on the auditd package exist for mdatp:
 > - The mdatp RPM package requires `audit`, `semanage`.
 > - For DEBIAN, the mdatp package requires `auditd`.
 > - For Mariner, the mdatp package requires `audit`.