Link to incident

Author: schmurky

defender-xdr/advanced-hunting-defender-results.md

@@ -53,80 +53,81 @@ You can use the link to incident feature to add advanced hunting query results t
 1.	In the advanced hunting query pane, enter your query in the query field provided, then select **Run query** to get your results.
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-2.	In the Results pane, select the events or records that are related to a new or current investigation you're working on, then select **Link to incident**.
+2.	In the Results page, select the events or records that are related to a new or current investigation you're working on, then select **Link to incident**.
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 3.	In the **Alert details** section in the Link to incident pane, select **Create new incident** to convert the events to alerts and group them to a new incident:
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-    You can also select **Link to an existing incident** to add the selected records to an existing one. Choose the related incident from the dropdown list of existing incidents. You can also enter the first few characters of the incident name or ID to find the existing incident.
+    You can also select **Link to an existing incident** to add the selected records to an existing incident. Choose the related incident from the dropdown list of existing incidents. You can also enter the first few characters of the incident name or ID to find the incident you want.
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 4.	For either selection, provide the following details, then select **Next**:
-    - **Alert title** - a descriptive title for the results that your incident responders can understand; this descriptive title becomes the alert title
-    - **Severity** - choose the severity applicable to the group of alerts
-    - **Category** - choose the appropriate threat category for the alerts
-    - **Description** - give a helpful description of the grouped alerts
+    - **Alert title** – a descriptive title for the results that your incident responders can understand; this descriptive title becomes the alert title
+    - **Severity** – choose the severity applicable to the group of alerts
+    - **Category** – choose the appropriate threat category for the alerts
+    - **Description** – give a helpful description of the grouped alerts
     - **Recommended actions** – list the recommended remediation actions for the security analysts who are investigating the incident
 5.	In the **Entities** section, select the entities that are involved in the suspicious events. Those entities are used to correlate other alerts to the linked incident and are visible from the incident page. 
 
-      If the projected columns belong to Defender XDR tables, the entities are automatically selected. If the projected columns are Microsoft Sentinel tables, you need to select the entities manually.
+      For Microsoft Defender XDR data, the entities are automatically selected. If the data is from Microsoft Sentinel, you need to select the entities manually.
 
-      There are two sections for entities selection:
+      There are two sections for which you can select entities:
 
     a. **Impacted assets** – impacted assets that appear in the selected events should be added here. The following types of assets can be added: 
     - Account
     - Device
     - Mailbox
-    - CloudApplication
-    - AzureResource
-    - AmazonResource
-    - GoogleCloudResource
+    - Cloud application
+    - Azure resource
+    - Amazon Web Services resource
+    - Google Cloud Platform resource
 
-    b. **Related evidence** – non assets that appear in the selected events can be added in this section. The supported entities’ types are:
+    b. **Related evidence** – non-assets that appear in the selected events can be added in this section. The supported entity types are:
     - Process
     - File
-    - RegistryValue
+    - Registry value
     - IP
-    - OAuthApplication
+    - OAuth application
     - DNS
-    - SecurityGroup
+    - Security group
     - URL
-    - MailCluster
-    - MailMessage
+    - Mail cluster
+    - Mail message
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > For queries containing only XDR data, only entity types that are available in XDR tables are shown.
 
-After an entity type is selected, select an identifier type that exists in the selected records and will be used to identify this entity. Each entity type has a list of supported identifiers, as can be seen in the relevant drop down. Use the description displayed when hovering on each identifier to better understand it. 
+After an entity type is selected, select an identifier type that exists in the selected records so that it can be used to identify this entity. Each entity type has a list of supported identifiers, as can be seen in the relevant drop down. Read the description displayed when hovering on each identifier to better understand it. 
 
-After selecting the identifier, select a column from the query results’ that contains the selected identifier. You can click on the schema icon to open the schema reference and read the description on every column, to make sure you chose the right column that matches the selected identifier. 
+After selecting the identifier, select a column from the query results that contain the selected identifier. You can click on the schema icon to open the schema reference and read the description on every column, to make sure you chose the right column that matches the selected identifier. 
 
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-In our example, we used a query to find events related to a possible email exfiltration incident, therefore the recipient’s mailbox and recipient’s account are the impacted entities, and the sender’s IP as well as mail message are related evidence.
+In our example, we used a query to find events related to a possible email exfiltration incident, therefore the recipient's mailbox and recipient's account are the impacted entities, and the sender's IP as well as email message are related evidence.
 
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-A different alert is created for each record with a unique combination of impacted entities. In our example, if there are three different recipients mailboxes and recipient object ids combinations, for instance, then three alerts are created and linked to the chosen incident.
+A different alert is created for each record with a unique combination of impacted entities. In our example, if there are three different recipient mailboxes and recipient object ID combinations, for instance, then three alerts are created and linked to the chosen incident.
 
 6. Select **Next**.
 7. Review the details you've provided in the Summary section. 
 8.	Select **Done**.
 
 ### View linked records in the incident
-You can click on the generated link from the summary step of the wizard or select the incident name from the incidents’ queue, to view the incident that the events are linked to.
+You can select the generated link from the summary step of the wizard or select the incident name from the incident queue, to view the incident to which the events are linked.
 
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 In our example, the three alerts, representing the three selected events, were linked successfully to a new incident.
-In each of the alert pages, you can find the complete information on the event or events in timeline view (if available) and query results view. 
+In each of the alert pages, you can find the complete information on the event or events in timeline view (if available) and the query results view. 
 
-You can also select the event from the timeline view or from the query results view to open the Inspect record pane.
+You can also select the event from the timeline view or from the query results view to open the **Inspect record** pane.
 
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 ### Filter for events added using advanced hunting
-You can view which alerts were generated from advanced hunting by filtering the Incidents queue and Alerts queue by Manual detection source 
+You can view which alerts were generated from advanced hunting by filtering incidents and alerts by **Manual** detection source 
 
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