Merge branch 'public' into Fix-reccomendations

Author: JackStuart

.openpublishing.redirection.defender-endpoint.json

@@ -124,6 +124,16 @@
       "source_path": "defender-endpoint/non-windows.md",
       "redirect_url": "/defender-endpoint/microsoft-defender-endpoint",
       "redirect_document_id": true
+    },
+    {
+      "source_path": "defender-endpoint/configure-endpoints-non-windows.md",
+      "redirect_url": "/defender-endpoint/onboarding",
+      "redirect_document_id": true
+    },
+    {
+      "source_path": "defender-endpoint/configure-server-endpoints.md",
+      "redirect_url": "/defender-endpoint/onboard-windows-server-2012r2-2016",
+      "redirect_document_id": true
     } 
   ]
 }

ATADocs/ATA-versions.md

@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 
 title: Advanced Threat Analytics versions
 description: Explains the different support options for Microsoft Advanced Threat Analytics (ATA) versions.
-author: batamig
-ms.author: bagol
-manager: raynew
+
+
+
 ms.date: 01/10/2023
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: advanced-threat-analytics

ATADocs/ata-architecture.md

@@ -3,10 +3,6 @@
 
 title: Advanced Threat Analytics architecture
 description: Describes the architecture of Microsoft Advance Threat Analytics (ATA)
-keywords:
-author: batamig
-ms.author: bagol
-manager: raynew
 ms.date: 01/10/2023
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: advanced-threat-analytics

ATADocs/ata-capacity-planning.md

@@ -3,10 +3,6 @@
 
 title: Planning your Advanced Threat Analytics deployment
 description: Helps you plan your deployment and decide how many ATA servers will be needed to support your network
-keywords:
-author: batamig
-ms.author: bagol
-manager: raynew
 ms.date: 01/10/2023
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: advanced-threat-analytics

ATADocs/ata-configuration-file.md

@@ -3,10 +3,6 @@
 
 title: Export and Import Advanced Threat Analytics Configuration
 description: How to export and import the ATA configuration.
-keywords:
-author: batamig
-ms.author: bagol
-manager: raynew
 ms.date: 01/10/2023
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: advanced-threat-analytics

ATADocs/ata-database-management.md

@@ -3,10 +3,6 @@
 
 title: Advanced Threat Analytics Database Management
 description: Procedures to help you move, backup, or restore the ATA database.
-keywords:
-author: batamig
-ms.author: bagol
-manager: raynew
 ms.date: 01/10/2023
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: advanced-threat-analytics

ATADocs/ata-health-center.md

@@ -3,10 +3,6 @@
 
 title: Monitor Advanced Threat Analytics System Health and Events
 description: Use the ATA Health Center to check how the ATA service is working and be alerted to potential problems and view system events in the Event viewer.
-keywords:
-author: batamig
-ms.author: bagol
-manager: raynew
 ms.date: 01/10/2023
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: advanced-threat-analytics

ATADocs/ata-prerequisites.md

@@ -3,10 +3,6 @@
 
 title: Advanced Threat Analytics personal data policy
 description: Provides links to information about how to delete private information and personal data from ATA.
-keywords:
-author: batamig
-ms.author: bagol
-manager: raynew
 ms.date: 01/10/2023
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: advanced-threat-analytics
@@ -34,7 +30,7 @@ ms.suite: ems
 
 All data in ATA that relates to entities is derived from Active Directory (AD) and replicated to ATA from there. When searching for personal data, the first place you should consider searching is AD.
 
-From the ATA Center, use the search bar to view the identifiable personal data that is stored in the database. Users can search for a specific user or device. Selecting the entity will open the user or device profile page. The profile provides you with the comprehensive details about the entity, it's history, and related network activity derived from AD.
+From the ATA Center, use the search bar to view the identifiable personal data that is stored in the database. Users can search for a specific user or device. Selecting the entity opens the user or device profile page. The profile provides you with the comprehensive details about the entity, its history, and related network activity derived from AD.
 
 ## Updating personal data
 
@@ -62,7 +58,7 @@ Running this completely removes the entity with the UPN [email protected] from
 
 ### Delete entity activity data
 
-This action permanently deletes an entity's activities data from the ATA database. All entities will are unchanged but the activities and security alerts related to them for the specified timeframe are deleted.
+This action permanently deletes an entity's activities data from the ATA database. All entities are unchanged but the activities and security alerts related to them for the specified timeframe are deleted.
 
 To run this command, provide the command name `deleteOldData`, and the number of days of data you want to keep in the database.
 

ATADocs/ata-privacy-compliance.md

@@ -2,11 +2,7 @@
 # required metadata
 
 title: Advanced Threat Analytics resources and readiness roadmap
-description: Provides a list of ATA resources, videos, getting started, deployment and readiness roadmap links.
-keywords:
-author: batamig
-ms.author: bagol
-manager: raynew
+description: Provides a list of ATA resources, videos, getting started, deployment, and readiness roadmap links.
 ms.date: 01/10/2023
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: advanced-threat-analytics
@@ -28,7 +24,7 @@ ms.suite: ems
 
 [!INCLUDE [Banner for top of topics](includes/banner.md)]
 
-This article provides you a readiness roadmap that will assist you to get started with Advanced Threat Analytics.
+This article provides you with a readiness roadmap that assists you to get started with Advanced Threat Analytics.
 
 ## Understanding ATA
 
@@ -51,31 +47,31 @@ ATA is composed of the ATA Center, which you can install on a server, and ATA Ga
 |Gateway sizing|Full Gateway, Lightweight Gateway|
 |Certificates|PKI, self-signed|
 
-If you are using physical servers, you should plan capacity. You can get help from the sizing tool to allocate space for ATA:
+If you're using physical servers, you should plan capacity. You can get help from the sizing tool to allocate space for ATA:
 
 [ATA sizing tool](ata-capacity-planning.md) - The sizing tool automates the collection of the amount of traffic ATA needs. It automatically provides supportability and resource recommendations for both the ATA Center and ATA Lightweight Gateways.
 
 [ATA capacity planning](ata-capacity-planning.md)
 
 ## Deploy ATA
 
-These resources will help you download and install the ATA Center, connect to Active Directory, download the ATA Gateway package, set up event collection, and optionally integrate with your VPN and set up honeytoken accounts and exclusions.
+These resources help you download and install the ATA Center, connect to Active Directory, download the ATA Gateway package, set up event collection, and optionally integrate with your VPN and set up honeytoken accounts and exclusions.
 
 [Download ATA](install-ata-step1.md#step-1-download-and-install-the-ata-center)
 
 [ATA POC playbook](https://aka.ms/ataplaybook) - Guide to all the steps necessary to do a successful POC deployment of ATA.
 
 ## ATA settings
 
-The basic necessary settings in ATA are configured as part of the installation wizard. However, there are a number of other settings that you can configure to fine-tune ATA that makes detections more accurate for your environment, such as SIEM integration and audit settings.
+The basic necessary settings in ATA are configured as part of the installation wizard. However, there are many other settings that you can configure to fine-tune ATA that makes detections more accurate for your environment, such as SIEM integration and audit settings.
 
 [Audit settings](https://github.com/microsoft/Azure-Advanced-Threat-Protection/tree/master/Auditing) – Audit your domain controller health before and after an ATA deployment.
 
 [ATA general documentation](index.yml)
 
 ## Work with ATA
 
-After ATA is up and running, you can view suspicious activities that are detected in the Attack timeline. This is the default landing page you are taken to when you log in to the ATA Console. By default, all open suspicious activities are shown on the attack time line. You can also see the severity assigned to each activity. Investigate each suspicious activity by drilling down into the entities (computers, devices, users) to open their profile pages that provide more information. These resources will help you work with ATA's suspicious activities:
+After ATA is up and running, you can view suspicious activities that are detected in the Attack timeline. This is the default landing page you're taken to when you sign in to the ATA Console. By default, all open suspicious activities are shown on the attack time line. You can also see the severity assigned to each activity. Investigate each suspicious activity by drilling down into the entities (computers, devices, users) to open their profile pages that provide more information. These resources help you work with ATA's suspicious activities:
 
 [ATA suspicious activity playbook](/samples/browse/?redirectedfrom=TechNet-Gallery) - This article walks you through credential theft attack techniques using readily available research tools on the internet. At each point of the attack, you can see how ATA helps you gain visibility into these threats.