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Author: tarTech23

defender-for-iot/TOC.yml

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
         href: whats-new.md  
       - name: Site security
         href: site-security-overview.md     
-      - name: Enterprise for IoT
+      - name: Enterprise IoT
         items:
           - name: Enterprise IoT overview
             href: enterprise-iot.md

defender-for-iot/enterprise-iot-licenses.md

@@ -19,18 +19,18 @@ Enterprise IoT security improves the monitoring and protection of the IoT device
 
 To add enterprise IoT security to Defender for Endpoint, there are two options available depending on your existing license:
 
-1. Customers with Microsoft 365 E5 (ME5) or E5 Security plans already have enterprise IoT available, but just need to turn on the feature. Each license supports five devices per ME5/ E5 Security license.
+- Customers with Microsoft 365 E5 (ME5) or E5 Security plans already have enterprise IoT available, but just need to turn on the feature. Each license supports five devices per ME5/ E5 Security license.
 
-    To turn on enterprise for IoT, see [ME5/ E5 Security customers](enterprise-iot-get-started.md#me5-e5-security-customers).
+    To turn on enterprise IoT, see [ME5/ E5 Security customers](enterprise-iot-get-started.md#me5-e5-security-customers).
 
-    To turn off enterprise for IoT, see [turn off enterprise IoT security](enterprise-iot-manage.md#turn-off-enterprise-iot-security).<!-- this instead of the disable enterprise IoT below??-->
+    To turn off enterprise IoT, see [turn off enterprise IoT security](enterprise-iot-manage.md#turn-off-enterprise-iot-security).<!-- this instead of the disable enterprise IoT below??-->
 
-1. Customers with a Defender for Endpoint P2 license only can use a trial standalone license for monitoring enterprise IoT devices. A trial license supports 100 devices.
+- Customers with a Defender for Endpoint P2 license only can use a trial standalone license for monitoring enterprise IoT devices. A trial license supports 100 devices.
 
     Start your enterprise IoT trial using the [Microsoft Defender for IoT - EIoT Device License - add-on wizard](https://signup.microsoft.com/get-started/signup?products=b2f91841-252f-4765-94c3-75802d7c0ddb&ali=1&bac=1) or via the [Microsoft 365 admin center](https://portal.office.com/AdminPortal/Home#/catalog).
 
     When the trial ends, the trial license is automatically canceled, and you lose access to enterprise IoT security features. To continue using enterprise IoT purchase a full standalone license. For more information, see [purchase a standalone license](enterprise-iot-get-started.md#set-up-a-standalone-full-license).
-<!-- remove of keep these instead of the lines above? -->
+<!-- remove or keep these instead of the lines above? 
 ## Disable enterprise IoT
 
 Customers with ME5/E5 Security plans who no longer need the enterprise IoT security can turn off the feature. For more information, see [Turn off enterprise IoT security](enterprise-iot-manage.md#turn-off-enterprise-iot-security).
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Customers with ME5/E5 Security plans who no longer need the enterprise IoT secur
 
 Customers with a Defender for Endpoint P2 license who don't add a standalone license by the time the trial ends, have the trial automatically canceled, and lose access to enterprise IoT security features.
 
-For more information, see [purchase a standalone license](enterprise-iot-get-started.md#purchase-the-standalone-license).
+For more information, see [purchase a standalone license](enterprise-iot-get-started.md#purchase-the-standalone-license). -->
 
 ## Resolve billing issues associated with my enterprise IoT plan
 

defender-for-iot/enterprise-iot-manage.md

@@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ To view enterprise IoT security value:
 
     - On the **Discovered vulnerabilities** tab, check for any known CVEs associated with the device. Known CVEs can help decide whether to patch, remove, or contain the device and mitigate risk to your network. Alternatively, use [advanced hunting queries](#sample-advanced-hunting-queries-for-enterprise-iot) to collect vulnerabilities across all your devices.
 
-### Hunt for threats
+## Hunt for threats on the Device inventory page
 
 On the **Device inventory** page, select **Go hunt** to query devices using tables like the *[DeviceInfo](/microsoft-365/security/defender/advanced-hunting-deviceinfo-table)* table. On the **Advanced hunting** page, query data using other schemas.
 
-## Sample advanced hunting queries for enterprise IoT
+## Advanced hunting queries for enterprise IoT
 
 This section lists sample advanced hunting queries that you can use in Microsoft 365 Defender to help you monitor and secure your IoT devices with enterprise IoT security.
 

defender-for-iot/enterprise-iot.md

@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@ Extend Microsoft Defender for IoT's security features to include enterprise IoT
 
 - Enterprise IoT: Enterprise IoT provides visibility and security for IoT devices in the corporate environment. Enterprise IoT network protection extends agentless features beyond operational environments, providing coverage for all IoT devices in your environment, such as printers, cameras, and purpose-built, proprietary, devices.
 
-## Security values that display in the Defender portal
+## Enterprise IoT data available in the Defender portal
 
-Security values, such as alerts, recommendations and vulnerabilities, from enterprise IoT seemlessly integrate with other data into the Defender portal.
+Enterprise IoT data for features such as alerts, recommendations and vulnerabilities, seamlessly integrates with other data into the Defender portal.
 
 ### Alerts