Update ios-new-ux.md

Author: denisebmsft

defender-endpoint/ios-new-ux.md

@@ -24,9 +24,9 @@ As part of our ongoing commitment to delivering an exceptional user experience,
 
 These updates are designed to improve usability, streamline navigation, and ensure that app meets the evolving needs of our users.
 
-## Key Changes
+## Key changes
 
-We're pleased to introduce the Device Protection feature card for our enterprise users which includes **Web Protection**, **Device Health**, and **Jail break** features are designed to be more user-friendly and accessible.
+We're pleased to introduce the Device Protection feature card for our enterprise users, which includes **Web Protection**, **Device Health**, and **Jail break** features that are designed to be more user-friendly and accessible.
 
 The updated cards also include **recommendation cards**, which prominently display any active alerts, keeping you informed. Features are now displayed as tiles to improve user experience and navigation efficiency.