Update ios-whatsnew.md

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defender-endpoint/ios-whatsnew.md

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 **February 2025:**
 
-As part of our Microsoft Defender for Mobile application, we currently have Open Wi-Fi detection as part of our Network Protection feature set. When enabled, this feature raises an alert in the Security portal. In its current state, the alert acts as an informational one with no action required by the SOC analyst/admin. It serves as a key piece of information that helps when triaging incidents involving mobile devices.
+As part of our Microsoft Defender for Mobile application, we offer Open Wi-Fi detection within our Network Protection feature set. When enabled, this feature raises an alert in the Security portal. Currently, the alert is informational and doesn't require any action by the SOC analyst or admin. It serves as a key piece of information that helps with triaging incidents involving mobile devices.
 
-**Current Behaviour:**
+**Current Behavior:**
 
 - Every time the end user connects to an open Wi-Fi network, an alert is raised.
 
 - If the user goes out of the open Wi-Fi range and reconnects to the same network, another alert is raised.
 
-Based on our research insights and inputs from Microsoft and other SOC teams, we are implementing a caching behaviour to ensure the value of the alerts remains and also does not cause fatigue to SOC teams due to sheer volume.
+Based on our research insights and inputs from Microsoft and other SOC teams, we're implementing a caching behavior to ensure the value of the alerts remains and also doesn't cause fatigue to SOC teams due to sheer volume.
 
-**New behaviour:** 
+**New behavior:** 
 
 - Every time the end user connects to an open Wi-Fi network, an alert is raised.
 
-- If a user re-connects to the same open wi-fi in the next 7 days, another alert won't be raised.
+- If a user reconnects to the same open wi-fi in the next seven days, another alert won't be raised.
 
-Please note that if a user connects to a different open Wi-Fi network, an alert will be immediately generated, and there is no change to that behaviour.
+Note that if a user connects to a different open Wi-Fi network, an alert is immediately generated, and there's no change to that behavior.
 
 ## Upgrading your experience: UX enhancements you should know about
 
 **January 2025**:
 
 **Key changes**:
 
-We are pleased to introduce the new dashboard for our enterprise users, which has been designed to be more user-friendly and accessible. The updated dashboard structure now includes recommendation cards for alerts and feature tiles.
+We're pleased to introduce the new dashboard for our enterprise users, which has been designed to be more user-friendly and accessible. The updated dashboard structure now includes recommendation cards for alerts and feature tiles.
 
 Recommendation cards prominently display any active alerts, ensuring you stay informed. Additionally, features are now presented in the form of tiles, enhancing ease of use and navigation.
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ The following screenshot is an example of what the user sees in their dashboard:
 
 **Recommendation cards for alerts**:
 
-The structure of the dashboard has been updated to include a recommendation card that contains active alerts (if any). In case there are multiple alerts, resolving the top alert will bring forward the next one. Recommendation cards have been implemented to provide a more cohesive user experience. These cards are designed to display important alerts and notifications prominently on the dashboard, as shown in the following table.
+The structure of the dashboard has been updated to include a recommendation card that contains active alerts (if any). In case there are multiple alerts, resolving the top alert brings forward the next one. Recommendation cards have been implemented to provide a more cohesive user experience. These cards are designed to display important alerts and notifications prominently on the dashboard, as shown in the following table.
 
 | Card | Description |
 |--|--|
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ Microsoft Defender for Endpoint on iOS enables Privacy Controls for both adminis
 
 Microsoft Defender for Endpoint on iOS enables **Optional Permissions** in the onboarding flow. Currently the permissions required by Defender for Endpoint are mandatory in the onboarding flow. With this feature, admin can deploy Defender for Endpoint on BYOD devices without enforcing the mandatory **VPN Permission** during onboarding. End users can onboard the app without the mandatory permissions and can later review these permissions. This feature is currently present only for enrolled devices (MDM).
 
-With **Disable Web Protection**, customers who don't want to set up a VPN can configure to disable **Web Protection** and deploy Defender for Endpoint without that feature. Other Defender for Endpoint features continue to work. This configuration is available for both the enrolled (MDM) devices and unenrolled (MAM) devices.
+With **Disable Web Protection**, customers who don't want to set up a VPN can configure to disable **Web Protection** and deploy Defender for Endpoint without that feature. Other Defender for Endpoint features continues to work. This configuration is available for both the enrolled (MDM) devices and unenrolled (MAM) devices.
 
 ## Integration with Tunnel
 
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ On January 25, 2022, we announced the general availability of Vulnerability mana
 ## 1.1.23250104
 
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-- **Zero-touch onboard for enrolled iOS devices** - With this version, the preview of Zero-touch onboard for devices enrolled through Microsoft Intune has been added. For more information, see this [Zero-touch (Silent) onboarding of Microsoft Defender for Endpoint](ios-install.md#zero-touch-silent-onboarding-of-microsoft-defender-for-endpoint).
+- **Zero-touch onboard for enrolled iOS devices** - With this version, the preview of Zero-touch onboards for devices enrolled through Microsoft Intune has been added. For more information, see this [Zero-touch (Silent) onboarding of Microsoft Defender for Endpoint](ios-install.md#zero-touch-silent-onboarding-of-microsoft-defender-for-endpoint).
 - **Privacy Controls** - Configure privacy controls for phish alert report. For more information, see [Configure iOS features](ios-configure-features.md).
 
 ## 1.1.23010101