fixed release note

Author: DeCohen

ATPDocs/whats-new.md

@@ -29,11 +29,11 @@ For updates about versions and features released six months ago or earlier, see
 
 |Version number |Updates |
 |---------|---------|
-|2.248|Improved event log query method, allowing us to capture a broader range of unique events at scale. You might notice an increase in captured activities. This update also includes additional security enhancements and performance improvements.|
+|2.248|Improved event log query method captures a broader range of unique events at scale. As a result, you might notice an increase in captured activities. This update also delivers additional security enhancements and performance improvements.|
 
 ### Updates to multiple detections to reduce noise and improve alert accuracy
 
-Several Defender for Identity detections are being updated to reduce noise and improve accuracy, making alerts more reliable and actionable. As the rollout continues, you may see a decrease in the number of alerts raised.
+Several Defender for Identity detections are being updated to reduce noise and improve accuracy, making alerts more reliable and actionable. As the rollout continues, you might see a decrease in the number of alerts raised.
 
 The improvements will gradually take effect across the following detections: