Update network-protection.md

Author: denisebmsft

defender-endpoint/network-protection.md

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 #### Network protection: C2 detection and remediation
 
-In its initial form, ransomware is a commodity threat, pre-programmed and focused on limited, specific outcomes (for example, encrypting a computer). However, ransomware has evolved into a sophisticated threat that is human-driven, adaptive, and focused on larger scale and more widespread outcomes, like holding an entire organization's assets or data for ransom.
+In its initial form, ransomware is a commodity threat that's preprogrammed and focused on limited, specific outcomes (like encrypting a computer). However, ransomware has evolved into a sophisticated threat that is human-driven, adaptive, and focused on larger scale and more widespread outcomes, like holding an entire organization's assets or data for ransom.
 
-Support for Command and Control servers (C2) is a key part of this ransomware evolution and is what enables these attacks to adapt to the environment they target. Breaking the link to the command-and-control infrastructure stops the progression of an attack to its next stage. For additional information about C2 detection and remediation, see [Detecting and remediating command and control attacks at the network layer](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/microsoft-defender-for-endpoint/detecting-and-remediating-command-and-control-attacks-at-the/ba-p/3650607).
+Support for Command and Control servers (C2) is an important part of this ransomware evolution, and it's what enables these attacks to adapt to the environment they target. Breaking the link to the command-and-control infrastructure stops the progression of an attack to its next stage. For additional information about C2 detection and remediation, see [Detecting and remediating command and control attacks at the network layer](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/microsoft-defender-for-endpoint/detecting-and-remediating-command-and-control-attacks-at-the/ba-p/3650607).
 
 #### Network protection: New toast notifications