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learn-pr/azure/choose-compute-provisioning/1-introduction.yml

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-### YamlMime:ModuleUnit
-uid: learn.choose-compute-provisioning.1-introduction
-metadata:
-  title: Introduction
-  description: In this unit, you'll learn about a business that must decide on its Azure compute resources.
-  ms.date: 03/29/2023
-  author: rmcmurray
-  ms.author: robmcm
-  ms.topic: unit
-title: Introduction
-durationInMinutes: 5
-content: |
-  [!include[](includes/1-introduction.md)]
+### YamlMime:ModuleUnit
+uid: learn.choose-compute-provisioning.1-introduction
+metadata:
+  title: Introduction
+  description: In this unit, you learn about a business that must decide on its Azure compute resources.
+  ms.date: 03/29/2023
+  author: rmcmurray
+  ms.author: robmcm
+  ms.topic: unit
+title: Introduction
+durationInMinutes: 5
+content: |
+  [!include[](includes/1-introduction.md)]

learn-pr/azure/choose-compute-provisioning/includes/1-introduction.md

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 Organizations often face challenges when they provision large numbers of compute resources in Azure.
 
-You're the solution architect for a clothing manufacturer that's moving several product design applications to Azure virtual machines. The company needs to scale out by adding many virtual machines now and in the future. Their current manual process is time consuming and error prone. They want to automate the scale out process to improve operational abilities. They're unsure about the tools that are available on Azure for provisioning compute resources, and where each fits into the overall provisioning process.
+You're the solution architect for a clothing manufacturer that's moving several product design applications to Azure virtual machines. The company needs to scale out by adding many virtual machines now and in the future. Their current manual process is time consuming and error prone. They want to automate the scale-out process to improve operational abilities. They're unsure about the tools that are available on Azure for provisioning compute resources, and where each fits into the overall provisioning process.
 
 In this module, you identify what tools are available on Azure to provision compute. You learn how you can choose an appropriate provisioning platform. Then, you automate deployment with a provisioning tool.
 

learn-pr/azure/choose-compute-provisioning/includes/2-provisioning-solutions.md

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 Desired State Configuration (DSC) extensions make it possible for you to deal with the configurations on your infrastructure that might need more complex installation procedures, such as reboots. DSC helps you define a state for your machines instead of writing detailed manual instructions on how to achieve that state for each machine. State configurations are relatively easy to read and implement.
 
-By using a DSC extension handler, which you can define for a virtual machine, you can enforce your states. The configurations for your states can be located in various places, such as Azure Blob storage or your internal file storage. The DSC extension handler grabs the configuration and implements the state on the target virtual machine. If reboots are necessary for a configuration, DSC continues to execute the state configuration after the reboots are completed.
+By using a DSC extension handler, which you can define for a virtual machine, you can enforce your states. The configurations for your states can be located in various places, such as Azure Blob storage or your internal file storage. The DSC extension handler grabs the configuration and implements the state on the target virtual machine. If it's necessary for reboots to occur during a configuration, DSC continues to execute the state configuration after the reboots are completed.
 
 The following example defines a DSC extension handler for a virtual machine in an Azure Resource Manager template. The `script` property points to a configuration script in blob storage.
 
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ The following example defines a Chef extension for a virtual machine in an Azure
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-A recipe might look like the one that follows. The recipe installs an IIS web server.
+A recipe might look like the one that follows. The recipe installs an Internet Information Services (IIS) web server.
 
 ```powershell
 #install IIS on the node.
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 ![Screenshot of the State configuration panel in the Azure portal.](../media/2-automation-state-config.png)
 
-Azure Automation state configuration makes it possible for you to ensure that all target machines are assigned the correct configurations automatically. It also ensures that each machine reports back on what its current state is and shows whether it has achieved the desired state. You can send this information for reporting and for further decision making. You can interact with Azure Automation state configuration through the Azure portal or through Azure PowerShell.
+Azure Automation state configuration makes it possible for you to ensure that the correct configurations are assigned to all target machines automatically. It also ensures that each machine reports back on what its current state is and shows whether it achieved the desired state. You can send this information for reporting and for further decision making. You can interact with Azure Automation state configuration through the Azure portal or through Azure PowerShell.
 
 ## Azure Resource Manager templates
 

learn-pr/azure/choose-compute-provisioning/includes/3-azure-native-solutions.md

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 ### Scenario
 
-The organization you work for has been given a new contract to work for a new client. They have a handful of virtual machines that run on Azure. The development team decides they need to install a small application they've written to help increase their team's productivity and make sure they can meet new deadlines. This application doesn't require a restart.
+The organization you work for receives a new contract to work for a new client. They have a handful of virtual machines that run on Azure. The development team decides they need to install a small application they wrote to help increase their team's productivity and make sure they can meet new deadlines. This application doesn't require a restart.
 
 The team asks you to implement a solution to ensure that these virtual machines all have the application installed properly, and in the fastest and least complex manner possible.
 
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 ### Solution summary
 
-DSC is easy to read, update, and store. DSC configurations help you declare the state your machines should be in at the point they're provisioned, rather than having instructions that detail how to put the machines in a certain state. Without Azure Automation State Configuration, you have to manage your own DSC configurations and orchestration. DSC can achieve more when it's coupled with Azure Automation State Configuration.
+DSC is easy to read, update, and store. DSC configurations help you declare the state your machines should be in at the point they're provisioned, rather than having instructions that detail how to put the machines in a certain state. Without Azure Automation State Configuration, you have to manage your own DSC configurations and orchestration. DSC can achieve more when coupled with Azure Automation State Configuration.
 
 ## Azure Automation State Configuration