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Author: lootle1

learn-pr/azure/deploy-resources-scopes-bicep/8-knowledge-check.yml

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ quiz:
     - content: "`targetScope = 'managementGroup'`"
       isCorrect: true
       explanation: |
-        Correct. You should deploy the role definition to the root management group, so that it is inherited by all your Azure resources throughout your organization.
+        Correct. You should deploy the role definition to the root management group, so that all your Azure resources throughout your organization inherit it.
         Role definitions can't be created at the tenant scope.
     - content: "`targetScope = 'subscription'`"
       isCorrect: false

learn-pr/azure/deploy-resources-scopes-bicep/includes/1-introduction.md

@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ Here's a diagram that shows how these components fit within their Azure subscrip
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/1-architecture-diagram.png" alt-text="Diagram that shows an Azure subscription, a policy, and a resource group containing a virtual network." border="false":::
 
-You know the R&D team has recently been given a lot of new funding, so it's likely to have more secret projects in the future. You decide to create reusable templates for each of its special projects.
+You know the R&D team has recently been given new funding, so it's likely to have more secret projects in the future. You decide to create reusable templates for each of its special projects.
 
 ## What will we be doing?
 
-In this module, you'll learn about the various scopes to which Azure resources can be deployed and some of the common resources that are deployed outside resource groups. You'll create a Bicep file to deploy to a subscription and a resource group. You'll also create a Bicep file to deploy to a management group. In the process, you'll learn about several features of Bicep, including how to:
+In this module, you learn about the various scopes to which Azure resources can be deployed and some of the common resources that are deployed outside resource groups. You create a Bicep file to deploy to a subscription and a resource group. You also create a Bicep file to deploy to a management group. In the process, you learn about several features of Bicep, including how to:
 
 - Set the scope of a Bicep file by using the `targetScope` keyword.
 - Use modules and the `scope` keyword to deploy your resources to various scopes within a single deployment.
@@ -33,11 +33,11 @@ You should be familiar with:
 - Child and extension resources.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> In this module, you'll build on your knowledge of extension resources. If you need a refresher, see [Deploy child and extension resources by using Bicep](xref:learn.azure.child-extension-bicep-templates).
+> In this module, you build on your knowledge of extension resources. If you need a refresher, see [Deploy child and extension resources by using Bicep](xref:learn.azure.child-extension-bicep-templates).
 
-To follow along with the exercises in the module, you'll need:
+To follow along with the exercises in the module, you need:
 
-- An Azure account, with the ability to create subscription-level resources. For one exercise, which is optional, you'll need to be able to create management groups and policies.
+- An Azure account, with the ability to create subscription-level resources. For one exercise, which is optional, you need to be able to create management groups and policies.
   > [!TIP]
   > If you can't meet these requirements with your current Azure account, you can get a [free trial](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?azure-portal=true) and create a new Azure subscription and tenant.
 - [Visual Studio Code](https://code.visualstudio.com), installed locally.