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learn-pr/azure/tm-use-recommended-tools-to-create-a-data-flow-diagram/2-threat-modeling-tool.yml

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     - content: "Generated threats are based on the entire diagram, not just each element or each individual interaction."
       isCorrect: true
       explanation: "The tool only looks at individual elements and single interactions"
-    - content: "Threats, stencils and stencil properties can be changed."
+    - content: "Threats, stencils, and stencil properties can be changed."
       isCorrect: false
       explanation: "The fields can be changed"
     - content: "Ways to reduce or eliminate risk are included with each generated threat."

learn-pr/azure/tm-use-recommended-tools-to-create-a-data-flow-diagram/includes/1-introduction.md

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-A data-flow diagram is a graphical representation of how your system works. It includes all data stores, processes, external entities, trust boundaries, and data-flows. Using these diagrams help all users in your organization collaborate to enhance your threat modeling work.
+A data-flow diagram is a graphical representation of how your system works. It includes all data stores, processes, external entities, trust boundaries, and data-flows. Using these diagrams helps all users in your organization collaborate to enhance your threat modeling work.
 
 ## Creating a data-flow diagram
 

learn-pr/azure/tm-use-recommended-tools-to-create-a-data-flow-diagram/includes/1b-recommended-tools.md

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 ## Visio
 
-Our other recommended tool is Visio. It gives you a clean canvas to create data-flow diagrams. With the Visio desktop and web applications, you can view, edit, and share Visio diagrams as well. You can also save them in Sharepoint or OneDrive for Business to share with others.
+Our other recommended tool is Visio. It gives you a clean canvas to create data-flow diagrams. With the Visio desktop and web applications, you can view, edit, and share Visio diagrams as well. You can also save them in Sharepoint or OneDrive to share with others.
 
 We talk about some of the basic functionality of Visio as well as pros and cons associated with the tool.

learn-pr/azure/tm-use-recommended-tools-to-create-a-data-flow-diagram/includes/2-threat-modeling-tool.md

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 > [!NOTE]
-> Microsoft Threat Modeling Tool template creation is a complex topic and will not be fully discussed in this learning path.
+> Microsoft Threat Modeling Tool template creation is a complex topic and won't be fully discussed in this learning path.

learn-pr/azure/tm-use-recommended-tools-to-create-a-data-flow-diagram/includes/3-visio.md

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 Microsoft Visio is recognized for its robust set of features to help anyone create quality flowcharts and data-flow diagrams. Visio tools help you visualize how an application or systems is organized towards threat modeling.
 
-You can leverage to create flowcharts, basic network diagrams, Venn diagrams, block diagrams, and busines matrices. All while being able to start quickly and in a collaborative manner. Let's look at some other pros to using Visio as well as review any cons.
+You can use to create flowcharts, basic network diagrams, Venn diagrams, block diagrams, and business matrices. All while being able to start quickly and in a collaborative manner. Let's look at some other pros to using Visio and review any cons.
 
 ## Pros
 
 Visio provides drag-and-drop functionality and the ability to annotate diagrams. Both are helpful when creating a diagram for your system.
 
-In addition, the tool is accessible for a wide variety of users. The intuitive interface and ease of use takes minimal time to learn and setup. It shares a familiar experience to other Microsoft 365 apps.
+In addition, the tool is accessible for a wide variety of users. The intuitive interface and ease of use takes minimal time to learn and set up. It shares a familiar experience to other Microsoft 365 apps.
 
-It also includes templates for diagrams and flowcharts to help you start quickly. This alongside real-time collaboration, commenting, and sharing with the Visio web app or Visio app in Micorosoft Teams makes it a valuable tool across your organization towards your threat modeling goals.
+It also includes templates for diagrams and flowcharts to help you start quickly. This alongside real-time collaboration, commenting, and sharing with the Visio web app or Visio app in Microsoft Teams makes it a valuable tool across your organization towards your threat modeling goals.
 
 ## Cons