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Author: lootle1

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/1b-elements.yml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 uid: learn.tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements.1b-elements
 title: Data-flow diagram elements
 metadata:
-  title: Data-flow diagram elements
+  title: Data-Flow Diagram Elements
   description: Explore each element in a data-flow diagram, made up of distinct shapes, functions, and recommended context
   ms.date: 03/27/2025
   author: rodsan

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/2-process-the-task-element.yml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 uid: learn.tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements.2-process-the-task-element
 title: Process - The task element
 metadata:
-  title: Process - The task element
+  title: Process - The Task Element
   description: The process element in a data-flow diagram
   ms.date: 03/27/2025
   author: rodsan

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/3-data-store-the-storage-element.yml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 uid: learn.tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements.3-data-store-the-storage-element
 title: Data store - The storage element
 metadata:
-  title: Data store - The storage element
+  title: Data Store - The Storage Element
   description: The data store element in a data-flow diagram
   ms.date: 03/27/2025
   author: rodsan

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/4-external-entity-the-no-control-element.yml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 uid: learn.tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements.4-external-entity-the-no-control-element
 title: External entity - The no control element
 metadata:
-  title: External entity - The no control element
+  title: External Entity - The No Control Element
   description: The external entity element in a data-flow diagram
   ms.date: 03/27/2025
   author: rodsan

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/5-data-flow-the-data-in-transit-element.yml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 uid: learn.tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements.5-data-flow-the-data-in-transit-element
 title: Data-flow - The data in transit element
 metadata:
-  title: Data-flow - The data in transit element
+  title: Data-Flow - The Data in Transit Element
   description: The data-flow element in a data-flow diagram
   ms.date: 03/27/2025
   author: rodsan

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/6-trust-boundary-the-trust-zone-change-element.yml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 uid: learn.tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements.6-trust-boundary-the-trust-zone-change-element
 title: Trust boundary - The trust zone change element
 metadata:
-  title: Trust boundary - The trust zone change element
+  title: Trust Boundary - The Trust Zone Change Element
   description: The trust boundary element in a data-flow diagram
   ms.date: 03/27/2025
   author: rodsan

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/includes/1-introduction.md

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ Examples include:
 
 We use elements and their interactions in threat modeling to help identify threats and reduce system risk. The process helps engineers collaborate more efficiently while securing their systems against the most common threats.
 
-In this module, you explore each element of a data-flow diagram. These elements have distinct shapes and functions, and require specific context.
+In this module, you explore each element of a data-flow diagram. These elements have distinct shapes and functions and require specific context.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > We might also refer to elements as as *Stencils* throughout this learning path.

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/includes/3-data-store-the-storage-element.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-![Rendering of a two parallel horizontal lines representing the Data Store Element.](../media/data-store.png)
+![Rendering of two parallel horizontal lines representing the Data Store Element.](../media/data-store.png)
 
 The **data store element** is depicted as parallel lines. This element represents data stored on a temporary or permanent basis.
 
@@ -21,6 +21,6 @@ Include the following context with each data store element:
 |Context|Questions|
 |-------|---------|
 |Type|Does the system use Azure SQL, cookies, local, or some other type of storage? If so, what is it?|
-|Function|How is the storage used? Is it used to share data, store backups, security logs, credentials, secrets?|
+|Function|How is the storage used? Is it used to share data, store backups, security logs, credentials, or secrets?|
 |Permission level|How is access control implemented? Who has read and write permissions?|
 |Additional controls|Is data encrypted? What about the disk? Are digital signatures used?|

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/includes/6-trust-boundary-the-trust-zone-change-element.md

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Examples include:
 - Connections to third-party services
 - Parts of your system only available to administrators
 
-Areas with changing trust zones are the most targeted by attackers, and should be carefully designed.
+Areas with changing trust zones are the most targeted by attackers and should be carefully designed.
 
 Microsoft has predefined trust-zone requirements for engineers to use internally. It takes the guesswork out of which boundaries to apply. If you work at Microsoft, contact your security team to learn more.
 

learn-pr/azure/tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements/index.yml

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ### YamlMime:Module
 uid: learn.tm-create-a-threat-model-using-foundational-data-flow-diagram-elements
 metadata:
-  title: Create a threat model using data-flow diagram elements
-  description: Data-flow diagrams are graphical representations of your system and should specify each element, their interactions and context.
+  title: Create a Threat Model Using Data-Flow Diagram Elements
+  description: Data-flow diagrams are graphical representations of your system and should specify each element, their interactions, and context.
   ms.date: 03/27/2025
   author: rodsan
   ms.author: rodsan
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ title: Create a threat model using data-flow diagram elements
 summary: Data-flow diagrams are graphical representations of your system and should specify each element, their interactions and helpful context.
 abstract: |
     In this module, you learn how to:
-    - Distinguish between the shape and function of each element
-    - Include the right context for an element when creating a data-flow diagram
+    - Distinguish between the shape and function of each element.
+    - Include the right context for an element when creating a data-flow diagram.
 prerequisites: None
 iconUrl: /training/achievements/create-a-threat-model-using-data-flow-diagram-elements.svg
 levels: