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learn-pr/azure/manage-linux-with-arc/includes/2-describe-managing-linux-concepts.md

@@ -53,9 +53,9 @@ Microsoft Sentinel is a scalable, cloud-native security information and event ma
 
 Microsoft Sentinel can help keep your environment secure by:
 
-- Collecting data at cloud scale across all users, devices, applications, and infrastructure, both on-premises and in multiple clouds.
-- Detecting previously undetected threats and minimize false positives using Microsoft's analytics and unparalleled threat intelligence.
-- Investigating threats with artificial intelligence and hunt for suspicious activities at scale, tapping into years of cyber security work at Microsoft.
+- Collecting data at cloud scale across all users, devices, applications, and infrastructure, including on-premises and across multiple clouds.
+- Detecting previously undetected threats and minimizing false positives using Microsoft's analytics and unparalleled threat intelligence.
+- Investigating threats with artificial intelligence and hunting for suspicious activities at scale.
 - Responding to incidents rapidly with built-in orchestration and automation of common tasks.
 
 Microsoft Sentinel comes with many connectors for Microsoft solutions, available out of the box and providing real-time integration.

learn-pr/azure/manage-linux-with-arc/includes/6-summary.md

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-As Contoso continues to employ Azure Arc for its Windows resources, it's learning that Azure Arc can also make managing its Linux systems more efficient. Onboarding Linux machines to Azure Arc allows Contoso to manage them effectively through a variety of Azure tools and capabilities.
+As Contoso continues to employ Azure Arc for its Windows resources, it's learning that Azure Arc can also make managing its Linux systems more efficient. Onboarding Linux machines to Azure Arc lets Contoso manage them effectively at scale by using Azure tools and capabilities.
 
-In this module, you learned about the many benefits of using Azure Arc for your Linux resources, including managing them securely via SSH. You also learned how Azure Arc lets you use Azure services to manage Linux machinese at scale.
+In this module, you learned about the many benefits of using Azure Arc for your Linux resources, including managing them securely via SSH. You also learned how Azure Arc lets you use Azure services to manage Linux machines at scale.
 
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