acrolinx updates

Author: Suzi Zuber

learn-pr/azure/azure-vmware-solution/includes/11-exercise-establish-outbound-internet.md

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-This unit focuses on practical implementation of enabling network controls using Azure Firewall. You'll then test if those controls are working or not from a VM in Azure VMware Solution workload segment.
+This unit focuses on practical implementation of enabling network controls using Azure Firewall. Then test to see if those controls are working or not from a virtual machine (VM) in Azure VMware Solution workload segment.
 
 ## Capture Azure VMware Solution workload segment address space
 
-Use command below to get the workload segment address space from Azure VMware Solution private cloud:
+Use the following command to get the workload segment address space from Azure VMware Solution private cloud:
 
 ```azurecli
 
 az vmware workload-network segment show --resource-group <resource-group-name>  --private-cloud <avs-private-cloud-name>
 ```
 
 ## Configure Azure Firewall Rule for Azure VMware Solution workload network segment
-Use command below to configure Firewall rule for workload segment:
+Use the following command to configure Firewall rule for workload segment:
 
 ```azurecli
 az network firewall network-rule create  --collection-name <firewall-rule-collection-name>  --destination-addresses <*-or-selective-addresses-to-be-opened>  --destination-ports <*-or-selective-ports-to-be-opened>  --firewall-name <name-of-firewall>  --name <firewall-rule-name> --protocols <*-or-selective-protocols-to-be-opened>  --resource-group <resource-group-name>  --priority <your-priority-preference>  --source-addresses <azure-vmware-solution-workload-network-segment-address-space>  --action Allow
 ```
 
 ## Test outbound internet connectivity from a VM in Azure VMware Solution workload network segment
 
-1. Log on to the VM in Azure VMware Solution workload network segment.
+1. Sign in the VM in Azure VMware Solution workload network segment.
 1. Navigate to any public URL from the VM. Any public URL should be accessible from browser.