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learn-pr/wwl/fabric-data-governance-purview/includes/1-introduction.md

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-Microsoft Fabric is an end-to-end, analytics, and data platform that provides a unified solution for data storage, movement, transformation, processing, real-time event routing, and reporting. When working with a large volume of data in Fabric, some of which is highly sensitive, you must ensure that it's accurate, trustworthy, and protected throughout the data lifecycle. Data governance is the set of techniques and tools that you use to implement these requirements.
+Microsoft Fabric is an end-to-end, analytics and data platform that provides a unified solution for data storage, movement, transformation, processing, real-time event routing, and reporting. When working with a large volume of data in Fabric, some of which is highly sensitive, you must ensure that it's accurate, trustworthy, and protected throughout the data lifecycle. Data governance is the set of techniques and tools that you use to implement these requirements.
 
-Microsoft Purview has a data governance solution designed to help you discover, catalog, and manage data assets across your organization. It provides a unified view of your data estate by scanning, and cataloging metadata from various data sources, including Microsoft Fabric. Purview has three pillars: data governance, data security, and risk and compliance. In this module, we'll focus on data governance.
+Microsoft Purview has a data governance solution designed to help you discover, catalog, and manage data assets across your organization. It provides a unified view of your data estate by scanning and cataloging metadata from various data sources, including Microsoft Fabric. Purview has three pillars: data governance, data security, and risk and compliance. In this module, we'll focus on data governance.
 
-Suppose you work in a role at health care company where you're responsible for stewarding data. You use Microsoft Fabric to store, analyze, manipulate, and report on data. You have sensitive patient information and need to ensure compliance with health data regulations like HIPAA. Fabric comes with several built-in data governance features. Now, you want to learn how Purview and Fabric together can help you protect your data and ensure compliance.
+Imagine you're in a data stewardship role at a healthcare organization, responsible for managing and safeguarding sensitive patient information. You rely on Microsoft Fabric to store, analyze, manipulate, and report on data, all while ensuring compliance with health data regulations such as HIPAA. Fabric offers built-in data governance capabilities to support these responsibilities. Now, you're looking to explore how integrating Microsoft Purview with Fabric can further enhance your ability to protect sensitive data and maintain regulatory compliance.
 
 In this module, you'll learn how Purview data governance features work with Fabric and how to use them for compliance, security, and discoverability.

learn-pr/wwl/fabric-data-governance-purview/includes/3-why-purview-fabric.md

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 Microsoft Purview enables you to discover, manage, and protect Fabric data using Purview tools. Purview can be configured to scan your Fabric item and present data governance findings in the Purview Hub located in Fabric or in Purview itself. To unlock the following capabilities, register your Fabric tenant in Microsoft Purview. 
 
 ### Microsoft Purview Data Map
-Data Map can be used to scan all of your data assets, to capture metadata about them and to identify sensitive data. It captures metadata about data in existing analytics, software-as-a-service, and operational systems in hybrid, on-premise, and multicloud environments. There's a built-in scanning and classification system that keeps the Data Map updated.
+Data Map can be used to scan all of your data assets, to capture metadata about them and to identify sensitive data. It captures metadata about data in existing analytics, software-as-a-service, and operational systems in hybrid, on-premises, and multicloud environments. There's a built-in scanning and classification system that keeps the Data Map updated.
 
 ### Microsoft Purview Unified Catalog
 

learn-pr/wwl/fabric-data-governance-purview/includes/4-govern-data-purview-hub.md

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 # [Overview](#tab/overview)
 
-:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-overview.png" alt-text="Screenshot of showing the Overview page of the Purview hub report, calling out the Take a tour button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-overview.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-overview.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Overview page of the Purview hub report, calling out the Take a tour button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-overview.png":::
 
 The overview page provides high-level insights about your tenant's data estate. Select the **Take a tour** button in the navigation pane for a quick introduction to the main features of the report.
 
 # [Sensitivity labels](#tab/sensitivity-labels)
 
-:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-sensitivity-labels.png" alt-text="Screenshot of showing the sensitivity labels page of the Purview hub report, calling out the help button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-sensitivity-labels.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-sensitivity-labels.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the sensitivity labels page of the Purview hub report, calling out the help button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-sensitivity-labels.png":::
 
 The sensitivity label page helps you analyze sensitivity label coverage and the distribution of confidential data throughout your tenant. The interactive, interoperable visuals help you:
 
-* Improve label coverage: You can set the label coverage goal to flag where label coverage isn't meeting org targets. You filter by domains, workspaces, item types, or creators. Select what you wish to explore and then, in the table, you can monitor related items. Use the **Only show unlabels items** to filter for unlabeled items only.
+* Improve label coverage: You can set the label coverage goal to flag where label coverage isn't meeting org targets. You filter by domains, workspaces, item types, or creators. Select what you wish to explore and then, in the table, you can monitor related items. Use the **Only show unlabeled items** to filter for unlabeled items only.
 
 * Monitor your classified data: You can use the label filter to select the sensitivity label you wish to explore. You can then filter by domains, workspaces, item types, or creator to find and drill down on your org's sensitive data.
 
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 # [Endorsement](#tab/endorsement)
 
-:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-endorsements.png" alt-text="Screenshot of showing the endorsements page of the Purview hub report, calling out the help button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-endorsements.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-endorsements.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the endorsements page of the Purview hub report, calling out the help button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-endorsements.png":::
 
 The endorsements page helps you monitor endorsed items (promoted, certified, and master data) and see where items with the most access might need your attention. The page helps you:
 
-* Promote items with high visibility: You can find candidates for promotion based on view access. For example, you can set a view-access threshold to flag items with that have high visibility but no endorsement.
+* Promote items with high visibility: You can find candidates for promotion based on view access. For example, you can set a view-access threshold to flag items that have high visibility but no endorsement.
 
 * Monitor your endorsed items: You can filter items by their endorsement status: promoted, certified, and master data.
 
 The side pane shows you insights based on your selections in the report.
 
 # [Domains](#tab/domains)
 
-:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-domains.png" alt-text="Screenshot of showing the domains page of the Purview hub report, calling out the help button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-domains.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-domains.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the domains page of the Purview hub report, calling out the help button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-domains.png":::
 
 The domains page helps you visualize and understand your org's data mesh structure and the distribution of items within it. For example, you can use the hierarchy tree to find workspaces that aren't associated with any domain. Select a domain/subdomain/workspace to drill through with the items explorer page.
 
 # [Items explorer](#tab/items-explorer)
 
-:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-items-explorer.png" alt-text="Screenshot of showing the items explorer page of the Purview hub report, calling out the help button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-items-explorer.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="../media/purview-hub-report-items-explorer.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the items explorer page of the Purview hub report, calling out the help button." lightbox="../media/purview-hub-report-items-explorer.png":::
 
 The items explorer page helps you monitor all the items in your tenant using granular filtering. You can use the items explorer's filters to find exactly the items you're looking for. You can see which items are located in personal workspaces, for instance, or which items were created by guest users, and much more.