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 In this module, we explore the foundational concepts that are essential for building reliable, scalable, and efficient datacenters. 
 
-You will gain an understanding of key topics such as site selection criteria, different datacenter topologies, and the importance of power and cooling systems. You will also learn about the role of Data Center Infrastructure Management (DCIM) and Building Management Systems (BMS) in monitoring operations. 
+You'll gain an understanding of selection criteria for a datacenter sit and importance of power and cooling systems. You'll also learn about the role of Data Center Infrastructure Management (DCIM) and Building Management Systems (BMS) in monitoring operations. 
 
 By the end of this module, you'll have a solid grasp of the critical elements that contribute to effective datacenter design and management.