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Author: lootle1

learn-pr/azure/create-windows-virtual-machine-in-azure/8-summary.yml

@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@ quiz:
     choices:
     - content: "HTTPS"
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: "The remote-desktop connection does not use the HTTPS protocol."
+      explanation: "The remote-desktop connection doesn't use the HTTPS protocol."
     - content: "SSH (22)"
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: "The remote-desktop connection does not use SSH."
+      explanation: "The remote-desktop connection doesn't use SSH."
     - content: "RDP (3389)"
       isCorrect: true
       explanation: "The Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP) uses port 3389 by default, so this port is the standard port you would open if you wanted to use an RDP client to administer your Windows virtual machines."
@@ -32,18 +32,18 @@ quiz:
       explanation: "You can store data files on the OS disk; however, you may want to optimize that disk for OS performance by selecting a Premium SSD type, which could be an expensive way to store your data."
     - content: "Temporary disk (D:)"
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: "The temporary disk is not persistent. You should not write important data to this disk."
+      explanation: "The temporary disk isn't persistent. You shouldn't write important data to this disk."
     - content: "Attached data disk"
       isCorrect: true
       explanation: "Dedicated data disks are considered the best place to store application data files. They can be larger than OS disks and you can optimize them for the cost and performance characteristics appropriate for your data."
   - content: "What is the final rule that is applied in every Network Security Group?"
     choices:
     - content: "Allow All"
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: "This could allow unwanted traffic to gain access if your rules are not configured correctly."
+      explanation: "This could allow unwanted traffic to gain access if your rules aren't configured correctly."
     - content: "Deny All"
       isCorrect: true
       explanation: "This is a safe choice. It blocks all traffic that you don't specifically allow."
     - content: "You configure the final rule to your needs."
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: "The final rule is added automatically when the security group is created, and you cannot change it."
+      explanation: "The final rule is added automatically when the security group is created, and you can't change it."

learn-pr/azure/create-windows-virtual-machine-in-azure/includes/2-create-a-windows-virtual-machine.md

@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ By default, two virtual hard disks (VHDs) will be created for your Windows VM:
 1. **A Temporary disk**: This provides temporary storage for the OS or any apps. It's configured as the D: drive by default and is sized based on the VM size, making it an ideal location for the Windows paging file.
 
 > [!WARNING]
-> The temporary disk is not persistent. You should only write data to this disk that you're willing to lose at any time.
+> The temporary disk isn't persistent. You should only write data to this disk that you're willing to lose at any time.
 
 #### What about data?
 

learn-pr/azure/create-windows-virtual-machine-in-azure/includes/5-exercise-connect-to-a-windows-vm-using-rdp.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ To connect to an Azure VM with an RDP client, you'll need:
 - Public IP address of the VM (or private if the VM is configured to connect to your network)
 - Port number
 
-You can enter this information into the RDP client, or download a pre-configured **RDP** file.
+You can enter this information into the RDP client, or download a preconfigured **RDP** file.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > An **RDP** file is a text file that contains a set of name/value pairs that define the connection parameters for an RDP client to connect to a remote computer using the Remote Desktop Protocol.
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ We have two approaches we can use to install software. First, this VM is connect
 
 With access to your local drive, you can copy the files for the custom software onto the VM and install the software. We won't actually do that because it's just a simulated scenario, but you can imagine how it would work.
 
-The more interesting thing to observe in the list of drives is what is *missing*. Notice that our **Data** drive is not present. Azure added a VHD, but didn't initialize it.
+The more interesting thing to observe in the list of drives is what is *missing*. Notice that our **Data** drive isn't present. Azure added a VHD, but didn't initialize it.
 
 ## Initialize data disks