Merge pull request #47880 from v-thpra/azure-triage-fix-1012024

Fix for Customer Feedback 1012024: Creating a VM - Configuring the Network

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

learn-pr/azure/create-windows-virtual-machine-in-azure/includes/3-exercise-create-a-vm.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Your company processes video content on Windows VMs. A new city has contracted with your company to process their traffic cameras, but it's a model with which you haven't worked before. You need to create a new Windows VM and install some proprietary codecs in order to process and analyze the new video content.
+Your company processes video content on Windows virtual machines. A new city has contracted with your company to process their traffic cameras, but it's a model with which you haven't worked before. You need to create a new Windows virtual machine (VM) and install some proprietary codecs in order to process and analyze the new video content.
 
 ## Create a new Windows virtual machine
 
@@ -43,13 +43,13 @@ Azure presents a *wizard* as a series of tabs to walk you through all the config
     | Image | Select **[smalldisk] Windows Server 2019 Datacenter - x64 Gen2** from the dropdown list. |
     | VM architecture | Accept default (x64) |
     | Run with Azure Spot discount| Accept default (unchecked). |
-    | Size | The **Size** field isn't directly editable. Select or accept the default **Standard DS1 v2**, which will give the VM 1 CPU and 3.5 GB of memory. Optionally, select the field to view recommended or recently chosen sizes; select **See all sizes** to explore filters for sizes based on vCPUs, RAM, Data disks, operations per second, and cost. Select the X in the top right of the pane to close the pane.  |
+    | Size | The **Size** field isn't directly editable. Select or accept the default **Standard DS1 v2**, which gives the VM 1 CPU and 3.5 GB of memory. Optionally, select the field to view recommended or recently chosen sizes; select **See all sizes** to explore filters for sizes based on vCPUs, RAM, Data disks, operations per second, and cost. Close the pane by selecting **X** in the top right corner.  |
     | **Administrator account** |
-    | Username | Enter a username you'll use to sign in to the VM. |
-    | Password | Enter a password that's at least 12 characters long and has at least three of the following four characteristics: one lower case character, one uppercase character, one number, and one special character that isn't '\\' or '-'. Use something you'll remember or write it down, as you'll need it later. |
+    | Username | Enter a username for signing in to the VM. |
+    | Password | Enter a password that's at least 12 characters long and has at least three of the following four characteristics: one lower case character, one uppercase character, one number, and one special character that isn't `\\` or `-`. Use something you can remember or write it down, as you need to use it later. |
     | Confirm password | Confirm your password. |
     | **Inbound port rules** |
-    | Public inbound ports | Select **Allow selected ports**. We want to be able to access the desktop for this Windows VM using RDP. |
+    | Public inbound ports | Select **Allow selected ports**. We want to be able to access the desktop for this Windows VM using Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP). |
     | Select inbound ports | Select **RDP (3389)** from the dropdown list. As the note in the UI indicates, we can also adjust the network ports after we create the VM. |
     | **Licensing** |
     | Would you like to use an existing Windows Server License | Leave unchecked | 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Azure presents a *wizard* as a series of tabs to walk you through all the config
 
 1. Select **Next : Disks**.
     > [!TIP]
-    > You can use the horizonal scroll bar to slide the view to the left to get back to the VM settings, which had opened a new pane to the right.
+    > You can use the horizonal scroll bar to slide the view to the left to get back to the VM settings, which had opened a new pane on the right hand side.
 
 ## Configure disks for the VM
 
@@ -75,11 +75,11 @@ Azure presents a *wizard* as a series of tabs to walk you through all the config
     | Key management | Accept the default. |
     | Enable Ultra Disk compatibility | Accept the default (unchecked) |
     | **Data disks** |
-    | Select **Create and attach a new disk** link. The **Create a new disk** pane appears. | Accept all the default values for the following settings: *Name*; *Source type*; *Size*; *Key management*; and *Enable shared disk*. This is where you could use a snapshot, or Storage Blob, to create a VHD. |
+    | Select **Create and attach a new disk** link. The **Create a new disk** pane appears. | Accept all the default values for the following settings: *Name*; *Source type*; *Size*; *Key management*; and *Enable shared disk*. This field is where you could use a snapshot, or Storage Blob, to create a virtual hard disk (VHD). |
 
 1. Select **OK** to save the settings and close the pane.
 
-    :::image type="content" source="../media/3-configure-disks.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the configure disks section for the VM.":::
+    :::image type="content" source="../media/3-configure-disks.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the configured disks section for the VM.":::
 
 1. On the **Create a virtual machine** pane **Disks** tab, under **Data disks**, there should now be a new row showing the newly configured disk.
 
@@ -89,9 +89,9 @@ Azure presents a *wizard* as a series of tabs to walk you through all the config
 
 1. Select **Next : Networking**.
 
-   In a production system where other components are already in use, it would be important to use an *existing* virtual network so that the VM can communicate with the other cloud services in the production solution. If no virtual network has been defined in this location, create it here and configure the:
+   In a production system where other components are already in use, it would be important to use an *existing* virtual network so that the VM can communicate with the other cloud services in the production solution. If no virtual network is defined in this location, create it here and configure the:
 
-    - **Subnet**: First subnet to subdivide the address space; it must fit within the defined address space. After the VNet is created, you can add more subnets.
+    - **Subnet**: First subnet to subdivide the address space; it must fit within the defined address space. After the virtual network is created, you can add more subnets.
     - **Public IP**: Overall IPV4 space available to this network.
 
 1. On the **Networking** tab, let's change some of the settings. Under the input field for **Virtual network**, select **Create new**. The **Create virtual network** pane appears.
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ Azure presents a *wizard* as a series of tabs to walk you through all the config
     |---------|---------|
     | Name  | Accept the default name. |
     | **Address space** |
-    | *Address range* | In the row below the heading, enter `172.16.0.0/16` to give the address space a full range of addresses, then check the box next to the address you just entered. If another address range row exists, select the **Delete** icon to delete it. |
+    | *Address range* | In the row below the heading, enter `172.16.0.0/16` to give the address space a full range of addresses, then check the box next to the address you just entered. If another address range row exists, delete it. |
     | **Subnets** |
-    | *Subnet name* | Enter *default* in the first input field, then select the checkbox next to the name you just entered. If another row exists, select it to delete it. |
+    | *Subnet name* | Enter *default* for the Subnet name in the first input field. Then, select the checkbox next to the name you just entered. If another row exists, select it to delete it. |
     | *Address range* | In the empty input field, enter `172.16.1.0/24` to give the subnet 256 IP addresses of space. |
 
 1. Select **OK** to save your settings and return to the **Create a virtual machine** pane.
@@ -114,11 +114,11 @@ Azure presents a *wizard* as a series of tabs to walk you through all the config
 
 ## Finish configuring the VM and create the image
 
-On the **Create a virtual machine** pane, the rest of the tabs have reasonable defaults and there's no need to change any of them. You can explore the other tabs if you like. Each field has an **(i)** icon next to it which, if selected, will show a detailed definition of that configuration setting. Reviewing field descriptions is a great way to learn about the settings you can use to configure the VM.
+On the **Create a virtual machine** pane, the rest of the tabs have reasonable defaults and there's no need to change any of them. You can explore the other tabs if you like. Each field has an **(i)** icon next to it which, if selected, shows a detailed definition of that configuration setting. Reviewing field descriptions is a great way to learn about the settings you can use to configure the VM.
 
-1. Select **Review + create**. The system will validate your options and display details about the VM being created.
+1. Select **Review + create**. The system validates your options and display details about the VM being created.
 
-1. Select **Create** to deploy the VM. The Azure dashboard will show the name of the VM that's being deployed and details about your deployment. Deployment may take several minutes.
+1. Select **Create** to deploy the VM. The Azure dashboard shows the name of the VM that's being deployed and details about your deployment. Deployment might take several minutes.
 
 1. After deployment completes, select **Go to resource**. Your virtual machine pane appears.