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 - **Atomic directory manipulation**: A hierarchical namespace stores objects in a directory hierarchy using a convention of embedding slashes (/) in the object name to denote path segments. You can improve the latency due to atomic directory manipulation, which a hierarchical namespace enables.
 
-- **Familiar interface style**: File systems with a hierarchical namespace are widely accepted by the developer community and are suitable for storage workloads designed for file systems that manipulate directories.
+- **Familiar interface style**: The developer community widely accepts file systems with a hierarchical namespace, and these file systems are suitable for storage workloads designed for directory manipulation.
 
 ## Understand Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2
 

learn-pr/azure/access-data-azure-blob-storage-multiple-protocols/includes/5-access-data-azure-blob-storage-sftp-protocol.md

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 8. Select the **Add** button to add the local user.
 
     > [!NOTE]
-    > If you enabled password authentication, the Azure-generated password appears in a dialog box after the local user has been added. You cannot retrieve this password later, so make sure to copy the password and store it in a place where you can find it.
+    > If you enabled password authentication, the Azure-generated password appears in a dialog box after the local user has been added. You can't retrieve this password later, so make sure to copy the password and store it in a place where you can find it.
 
 9. Use an SFTP client to establish an SSH connection to your Azure storage account.
 
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     > [!NOTE]
-    > Accounts that have SFTP enabled do not support GRS, GZRS, read-access geo-redundant storage (RA-GRS), and read-access geo-zone-redundant storage (RA-GZRS).
+    > Accounts that have SFTP enabled don't support GRS, GZRS, read-access geo-redundant storage (RA-GRS), and read-access geo-zone-redundant storage (RA-GZRS).
 
 To access Blob Storage using SFTP, your firewall must allow traffic on TCP port 22. You can optimize performance if you're using an SFTP client that supports multiple concurrent connections. Some SFTP clients support a higher buffer size, which improves the upload performance. However, the maximum upload file size is limited by the client message size.

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 In this unit, you learned how to access data in Blob Storage using multiple protocols such as REST, HDFS, NFS, and SFTP.
 
-Your company can now use only one storage account to meet different department requirements to store and access data by using different tools. By using multiprotocol support for accessing data that resides in Azure Blob Storage, your organization can now eliminate data silos, and you no longer need to refactor the data prior moving to the cloud.
+Your company can now use only one storage account to meet different department requirements to store and access data by using different tools. By using multiprotocol support for accessing data that resides in Azure Blob Storage, your organization can now eliminate data silos, and you no longer need to refactor the data prior to moving to the cloud.
 
 ## References