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-[Azure Migrate and Modernize (formerly known as Azure Migration and Modernization program) and Azure Innovate](https://aka.ms/azureheroofferings) are two new offerings to help you simplify your journey to cloud. Both offerings provide proactive guidance and the right mix of expert help at every stage of your cloud journey.
+[Azure Migrate and Modernize (formerly known as Azure Migration and Modernization program) and Azure Innovate](https://aka.ms/azureheroofferings) are two offerings to help you simplify your journey to cloud. Both offerings provide proactive guidance and the right mix of expert help at every stage of your cloud journey.
 
-Azure Migrate and Modernize will help you migrate and modernize applications, infrastructure, and database to the cloud. Azure Innovate is a new offering designed to help you with your advanced innovation needs such as infusing AI into your apps and experiences, advanced analytics, and building custom cloud native application.
+Azure Migrate and Modernize will help you migrate and modernize applications, infrastructure, and databases to the cloud. Azure Innovate is a new offering designed to help you with your advanced innovation needs such as infusing AI into your apps and experiences, advanced analytics, and building custom cloud native application.
 
-All customers can access curated resources and frameworks, help from advanced specialized partners and tools such as Azure Migrate, and Microsoft Cost Management, step-by-step technical guidance, low cost or no cost skilling.
+All customers can access curated resources and frameworks and help from advanced specialized partners. There are also tools such as Azure Migrate, Microsoft Cost Management, step-by-step technical guidance, low cost or no cost skilling.
 
 Here are some of the benefits available from Azure Migrate and Modernize and Azure Innovate:
 
-- **Comprehensive resources in one place** - Extensive guidance with assessments, proof of concepts (PoCs), pilots, tooling, deployment assistance to ensure a well architected and optimized approach from start to finish.
-- **Proven technical frameworks** - Cloud Adoption Framework (CAF) and Well-Architected Framework (WAF), helps you to design optimized workloads from the start, with security and cost recommendations built throughout.
-- **Free automated tooling** - Azure Migrate provides you with discovery, assessment, business case analysis, planning, migration, and modernization capabilities.
-- **Access to experts** - Microsoft experts or specialized partners will help you at each step from planning to deployment which includes assessments, total cost of ownership (TCO) analysis, cloud adoption approaches, workshops, pilots, and deployment.
-- **Microsoft-led delivery** - In addition to specialized partners being available for more complex workloads, with Azure Migrate and Modernize, you can also benefit from Microsoft-led delivery for rapid rehost migrations to increase both capacity and capability across the Azure portfolio to get the expert help as needed.
-- **Partner funding for specialized partners** - An increased investment in partner ecosystem to increase both capacity and capability across the Azure portfolio to get the expert help as needed.
-- **Extensive coverage from migration to innovation** - Azure Migrate and Modernize and Azure Innovate helps you across a wide range of your cloud adoption needs which includes migrating or modernize Windows Server & SQL Server, Linux, Oracle, SAP, HPC, analytics AI and more.
+- **Comprehensive resources in one place**: Extensive guidance with assessments, proof of concepts (PoCs), pilots, tooling, and deployment assistance to ensure a well architected and optimized approach from start to finish.
+- **Proven technical frameworks**: Cloud Adoption Framework (CAF) and Well-Architected Framework (WAF) help you to design optimized workloads from the start, with security and cost recommendations built throughout.
+- **Free automated tooling**: Azure Migrate provides you with discovery, assessment, business case analysis, planning, migration, and modernization capabilities.
+- **Access to experts**: Microsoft experts or specialized partners will help you at each step from planning to deployment, which includes assessments, total cost of ownership (TCO) analysis, cloud adoption approaches, workshops, pilots, and deployment.
+- **Microsoft-led delivery**: In addition to specialized partners being available for more complex workloads, with Azure Migrate and Modernize you can also benefit from Microsoft-led delivery for rapid rehost migrations. This helps increase both capacity and capability across the Azure portfolio to get expert help as needed.
+- **Partner funding for specialized partners**: An increased investment in partner ecosystem to increase both capacity and capability across the Azure portfolio to get expert help as needed.
+- **Extensive coverage from migration to innovation**: Azure Migrate and Modernize and Azure Innovate help you across a wide range of your cloud adoption needs, which includes migrating or modernize Windows Server & SQL Server, Linux, Oracle, SAP, HPC, analytics AI, and more.
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/ammp-phases-2.png" alt-text="Diagram showing the Azure Migration and Modernization Program project phases.":::
 
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 An Azure project consists of one or more Azure solutions that help meet the most common business needs and scenarios deployed in production: a group of Azure services, third-party applications, and related products.
 
-FastTrack for Azure can help with many solutions including:
+FastTrack for Azure can help with many solutions, including:
 
 - Windows Server migration
 - SQL Server migration
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 When you see the Azure Expert MSP logo, this means Microsoft has validated that you're connecting with one of our most capable Azure Managed Service Providers. Whether you're working on mission-critical apps, entire data center footprints, or hybrid environments, Azure Expert MSPs have proven their capabilities to help you. These MSPs must meet the following requirements to be a part of the program:
 
-- Microsoft Gold Cloud Platform Partner
-- Pass an intensive audit performed by Microsoft
-- Re-evaluated annually to ensure MSP continues to meet update technology standards
+- Microsoft Gold Cloud Platform Partner.
+- Pass an intensive audit performed by Microsoft.
+- Re-evaluated annually to ensure MSP continues to meet updated technology standards.

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 - [Microsoft Cloud Adoption Framework for Azure](https://azure.microsoft.com/solutions/cloud-enablement/cloud-adoption-framework/)
 - [Create your Azure free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?azure-portal=true)
 - [Best practices to accelerate your cloud migration](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/azure-migration-and/best-practices-for-accelerating-cloud-migration/ba-p/1534495)
-- [Cloud migration and modernization resources](https://azure.microsoft.com/solutions/migration/)