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Author: v-thpra

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/4-set-up-development-environment-exercise.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Exercise - Set up your F# development environment
 metadata:
   unitType: exercise
   title: "Exercise - Set up your F# development environment"
-  description: "Install the .NET SDK, Visual Studio Code, and Ionide F# extension to develop your F# applications"
+  description: "Install the .NET SDK, Visual Studio Code, and Ionide F# extension for developing your F# application."
   ms.date: 02/22/2023
   author: baronfel
   ms.author: chethusk 

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/6-write-your-first.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Exercise - Write your first line of F# code
 metadata:
   unitType: exercise
   title: "Exercise - Write your first line of F# code"
-  description: "Use F# Interactive to print Hello World to the console"
+  description: "Use F# Interactive to print Hello World to the console."
   ms.date: 02/22/2023
   author: baronfel
   ms.author: chethusk 

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/7-fsharp-build-application.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Create F# applications
 metadata:
   unitType: learning-content
   title: "Create F# applications"
-  description: "Overview of .NET templates and how they can help you build your first F# application"
+  description: "Overview of .NET templates and how they can help you build your first F# application."
   ms.date: 02/22/2023
   author: baronfel
   ms.author: chethusk 

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/8-build-your-first.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Exercise - Create your first F# application
 metadata:
   unitType: exercise
   title: "Exercise - Create your first F# application"
-  description: "Create an F# application to print out a message to a text console"
+  description: "Create an F# application to print a message to a text console."
   ms.date: 02/22/2023
   author: baronfel
   ms.author: chethusk 

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/9-summary.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Summary
 metadata:
   unitType: summary
   title: "Summary"
-  description: "In this module you set up your F# development environment, wrote your first line of F# code, and built your first F# application"
+  description: "In this module you set up your F# development environment, wrote your first line of F# code, and built your first F# application."
   ms.date: 02/22/2023
   author: baronfel
   ms.author: chethusk 

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/includes/3-fsharp-development-environment.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-F# has access to world-class tooling. Whether it's a lightweight text editor or an IDE, you have choices when it comes to choosing your tools. However, at a minimum, you need the .NET SDK to start writing F# code. 
+F# has access to world-class tooling. Whether it's a lightweight text editor or an IDE, you have choices when it comes to choosing your tools. However, at a minimum, you need the .NET SDK to start writing F# code.
 
 ## .NET SDK
 
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ The .NET SDK is free and cross-platform, which means you can install it on Windo
 
 You can use any text editor to write F# code. However, Visual Studio Code is a free, open-source, and cross-platform text editor that is lightweight but also offers the following features to take your development workflow to the next level:
 
-- **Debugging:** Visual Studio Code's built-in debugger helps accelerate your edit, compile and debug loop.
-- **Version control:** Visual Studio Code has integrated source control management (SCM) and includes Git support built-in to help you keep track of your code as it changes.
+- **Debugging:** Visual Studio Code's built-in debugger helps accelerate your edit, compile, and debug loop.
+- **Version control:** Visual Studio Code integrates source control management (SCM) and includes Git support built-in to help you keep track of your code as it changes.
 - **Integrated terminal:** Visual Studio Code includes a fully featured integrated terminal, which makes it easy to work with the .NET CLI from inside the editor.
 - **Extensions:** Extend the functionality of Visual Studio Code using extensions.
 

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/includes/4-set-up-development-environment.md

@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ In this exercise, set up your F# development environment by installing the .NET
 To get started writing code with F#, install the .NET SDK.
 
 1. [Download and install .NET SDK](https://dotnet.microsoft.com/download/dotnet) for your operating system.
-1. Verify that the .NET SDK has installed successfully
-    1. Open the terminal
+1. Verify that the .NET SDK is installed successfully.
+    1. Open the terminal.
     1. Enter the following .NET CLI command
 
         ```dotnetcli
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ To get started writing code with F#, install the .NET SDK.
     1. The following output is similar to what displays in the console. Your version might be different, but as long as the version information is output to the console, it means everything is installed correctly.
 
         ```console
-        5.0.302
+        9.0.201
         ```
 
 ## Install Visual Studio Code & Ionide F# extension

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/includes/5-fsharp-interactive.md

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ F# Interactive command line options:
     See 'dotnet fsi --help' for options
 ```
 
-The end of an expression is delimited by the `;;` characters. No code is evaluated until you input the `;;` characters. This structure is useful when writing multi-line expressions since your code isn't delimited by new line characters.
+The `;;` characters delimit the end of an expression. No code is evaluated until you input the `;;` characters. This structure is useful when writing multi-line expressions since your code isn't delimited with new line characters.
 
 Evaluating F# code works the same way. The following code prints a message to the console.
 
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ After you use the F# Interactive REPL, use the `#q` or `#quit` commands to exit.
 > #q;;
 ```
 
-## fsx script files
+## F# script files
 
 As you write more code, you can save your code in a script with the *fsx* file extension.
 

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/includes/6-write-your-first.md

@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
-In this exercise, we write our first line of F# code, which prints the message **Hello World** to the console.
+In this exercise, we write our first F# code, which prints the message **Hello World** to the console.
 
 ## Start F# Interactive
 
-1. Open a command prompt
-1. Enter the following .NET CLI command into the command prompt
+1. Open a command prompt.
+1. Enter the following .NET CLI command into the command prompt:
 
     ```dotnetcli
     dotnet fsi
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@ In this exercise, we write our first line of F# code, which prints the message *
     >
     ```
 
-## Write your first line of code
+## Write your first F# code
 
-Add the following line of code next to the `>` character in the F# Interactive terminal
+Add the following line of code next to the `>` character in the F# Interactive terminal:
 
 ```fsharp
 printfn "Hello World!";;
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Hello World!
 val it : unit = ()
 ```
 
-Congratulations! You've written your first line of F# code!
+Congratulations! You wrote your first line of F# code!
 
 ## (Optional) Write a script
 

learn-pr/language/fsharp-first-steps/includes/7-fsharp-build-application.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-At this point, you've used the REPL and maybe even created an *fsx* script file. Now you're at the point where your application has grown so you need to include more files, and the ability to package and distribute your application. To do so, you need to create a project. The .NET SDK provides various project templates to help you get started building all types of applications.
+At this point, you used the Read-Evaluate-Print-Loop (REPL) and maybe even created a *fsx* script file. Now you're at the point where your application is growing and you need to include more files. You also want the ability to package and distribute your application. To do so, you need to create a project. The .NET SDK provides various project templates to help you get started building all types of applications.
 
 ## What are .NET Templates?
 
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ When you install the .NET SDK, you receive over a dozen built-in templates for c
 - ASP.NET Core web apps
 - Configuration files
 
-F# has support for various templates, everything from testing and web to class libraries. For a full list of supported projects, run `dotnet new -l` at the console.
+F# has support for various templates, everything from testing and web projects to class libraries. For a full list of supported projects, run `dotnet new -l` at the console.
 
 ## Create an application using templates
 
-To create a new application, use the `dotnet new` .NET CLI command. For example, if you want to create an F# console application, you'd use the following command.
+To create a new application, use the `dotnet new` .NET CLI command. For example, if you want to create an F# console application, you use the following command.
 
 ```fsharp
 dotnet new console --language F# -o MyFSharpApp
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ After a few seconds, a directory called *MyFSharpApp* appears with the code for
 There are two files in the *MyFSharpApp* directory:
 
 - **Program.fs** - The entrypoint for your application.
-- **MyFSharpApp.fsproj** - MSBuild project file that contains build information and instructions. MSBuild is a platform for building applications that provides an XML schema for a project file that controls how the build platform processes and builds software.
+- **MyFSharpApp.fsproj** - The MSBuild project file that contains build information and instructions. MSBuild is a platform for building applications that provides an XML schema for a project file that controls how the build platform processes and builds software.
 
 The *Program.fs* file contains the following code:
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ The `main` function is the entry point of the application. It uses the `from` fu
 
 ## Build an application
 
-Now that you've created a console application, it's time to build it using the `dotnet build` command. The `dotnet build` command builds the project and its dependencies into a set of binaries. The binaries include the project's code in Intermediate Language (IL) files with a *.dll* extension. Depending on the project type and settings, other files might be included, such as:
+Now that your console application is created, it's time to build it using the `dotnet build` command. The `dotnet build` command builds the project and its dependencies into a set of binaries. The binaries include the project's code in Intermediate Language (IL) files with a *.dll* extension. Depending on the project type and settings, other files might be included, such as:
 
 - An executable that you can use to run the application, if the project type is an executable targeting .NET Core 3.0 or later.
 - Symbol files used for debugging with a *.pdb* extension.