Merge pull request #33921 from v-thpra/azure-triage-fix-463012

Fix For Technical Review 463012: Introduction to Linux on Azure

Author: American-Dipper

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-linux/1-introduction.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Introduction
 metadata:
   title: Introduction
   description: Introduction
-  ms.date: 6/26/2020
+  ms.date: 04/12/2023
   author: ChaseCrum
   ms.author: chasecrum
   ms.topic: interactive-tutorial

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-linux/2-what.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: What is Linux on Azure?
 metadata:
   title: What is Linux on Azure?
   description: What is Linux on Azure?
-  ms.date: 6/26/2020
+  ms.date: 04/12/2023
   author: ChaseCrum
   ms.author: chasecrum
   ms.topic: interactive-tutorial

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-linux/3-how.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: How to use Linux on Azure
 metadata:
   title: How to use Linux on Azure
   description: How to use Linux on Azure
-  ms.date: 6/26/2020
+  ms.date: 04/12/2023
   author: ChaseCrum
   ms.author: chasecrum
   ms.topic: interactive-tutorial

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-linux/4-when.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: When to use Linux on Azure
 metadata:
   title: When to use Linux on Azure
   description: When to use Linux on Azure
-  ms.date: 6/26/2020
+  ms.date: 04/12/2023
   author: ChaseCrum
   ms.author: chasecrum
   ms.topic: interactive-tutorial

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-linux/5-knowledge-check.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Knowledge check
 metadata:
   title: Knowledge check
   description: Knowledge check
-  ms.date: 6/26/2020
+  ms.date: 04/12/2023
   author: ChaseCrum
   ms.author: chasecrum
   ms.topic: interactive-tutorial
@@ -23,15 +23,15 @@ quiz:
       explanation: IaaS is based on virtual machines and infrastructure, not a single shared host.
     - content: A collection of platform services to which you can deploy Linux-based applications
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: This is a description of platform as a service (PaaS) computing.
+      explanation: This answer is a description of platform as a service (PaaS) computing.
     - content: A set of Microsoft datacenter services that can host and manage your hardware infrastructure
       isCorrect: false
       explanation: Azure is a cloud computing service, not a datacenter provider or hardware colocation service.
   - content: Which of the following Azure services is a platform as a service (PaaS) that can host Linux applications?
     choices:  
     - content: Azure Cognitive Services search APIs
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: Cognitive Services provides search APIs that are powered by AI, and that can be used by applications on any platform. It doesn't host applications.
+      explanation: Cognitive Services provides search APIs that are powered by AI, and are used by applications on any platform. It doesn't host applications.
     - content: Virtual machines
       isCorrect: false
       explanation: Virtual machines are a component of infrastructure as a service (IaaS) computing.
@@ -43,13 +43,13 @@ quiz:
       explanation: Azure App Service is a managed web application hosting platform that can host applications on Linux.
   - content: Which of the following is *not* a benefit of using an endorsed Linux distribution on Azure?
     choices:  
-    - content: Availability of optimized, regularly-updated VM images
+    - content: Availability of optimized, regularly updated VM images
       isCorrect: false
       explanation: Microsoft works with partners to provide VM images optimized for Azure, and requires them to publish updates to their images regularly.
     - content: SLA connectivity guarantees
       isCorrect: false
       explanation: The VM platform SLA of Azure applies to Linux virtual machines only when endorsed images are used.
-    - content: Enhanced compatibility with additional programming languages
+    - content: Enhanced compatibility with more programming languages
       isCorrect: true
       explanation: Endorsed distributions don't provide any benefits related to specific programming languages.
     - content: Distribution-specific benefits like SAP integration

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-linux/6-summary.yml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Summary
 metadata:
   title: Summary
   description: Summary
-  ms.date: 6/26/2020
+  ms.date: 04/12/2023
   author: ChaseCrum
   ms.author: chasecrum
   ms.topic: interactive-tutorial

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-linux/includes/1-introduction.md

@@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
-Microsoft Azure is a growing collection of integrated public cloud services, including virtual machines, networking, storage, databases, analytics, mobile, and web services. It enables you to build, manage, and deploy applications globally and at scale, by using your preferred tools and frameworks. But it's not just about Microsoft software: if your organization uses Linux-based development environments and runs production software on Linux, there's a place for you on Azure.
+Microsoft Azure is a growing collection of integrated public cloud services. Including, virtual machines, networking, storage, databases, analytics, mobile, and web services. It enables you to build, manage, and deploy applications globally and at scale, by using your preferred tools and frameworks. But it's not just about Microsoft software: if your organization uses Linux-based development environments and runs production software on Linux, there's a place for you on Azure.
 
-With Azure, you can power your applications with your preferred Linux distribution on Azure virtual machines and Azure virtual machine scale sets, for elasticity based on demand. The virtual network infrastructure of Azure, as well as its tools and applications, can add value to your Linux-based apps. You can also take full advantage of the unique managed service platforms (platform as a service) on Azure, to reduce the management burden of your applications without sacrificing the Linux foundation that you rely on. Microsoft is a neutral technology provider, working with all major Linux distribution partners and community distributions to offer you the most comprehensive choice of Linux and Linux-based apps.
+With Azure, you can power your applications with your preferred Linux distribution on Azure virtual machines and Azure Virtual Machine Scale Sets, for elasticity based on demand. The virtual network infrastructure of Azure, and its tools and applications, can add value to your Linux-based apps. You can also take full advantage of the unique managed service platforms (platform as a service) on Azure. These platforms enable you to reduce the management burden of your applications without sacrificing the Linux foundation that you rely on. Microsoft is a neutral technology provider, working with all major Linux distribution partners and community distributions to offer you the most comprehensive choice of Linux and Linux-based apps.
 
-In this module, you'll see what it means to run Linux on Azure, and how to think about moving your Linux applications and workloads to the cloud. You'll learn about the value of the Azure virtual Linux infrastructure and Linux-based service platforms, and how and when to think about taking advantage of both.
+In this module, you see what it means to run Linux on Azure, and how to think about moving your Linux applications and workloads to the cloud. You learn about the value of the Azure virtual Linux infrastructure and Linux-based service platforms, and how and when to think about taking advantage of both.
 
 ## Learning objectives
 
-By the end of this module, you will be able to:
+In this module, you learn how to:
 
-- Differentiate between Linux on Azure infrastructure as a service (IaaS) and platform as a service (PaaS) computing, and the value of each.
-- Describe Azure tools and services that bring additional value to Linux workloads.
+- Differentiate between Linux on Azure infrastructure as a service (IaaS) and platform as a service (PaaS) computing, and assess the value of each.
+- Describe Azure tools and services that bring extra value to Linux workloads.
 - Explain the components of Linux virtual infrastructure in Azure, and the role of Microsoft in supporting different Linux distributions.
 - Describe the value of Linux-based service platforms on Azure.
 - Envision building new Linux-based workloads and migrating existing workloads to Azure.

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-linux/includes/2-what.md

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
-"Linux on Azure" broadly encompasses two different kinds of Azure support for Linux applications and workloads: **infrastructure as a service (IaaS)** and **platform as a service (PaaS)**. Let's explore exactly what those terms mean, and learn more about additional Azure services and features you can take advantage of regardless of how you use Linux on Azure.
+"Linux on Azure" broadly encompasses two different kinds of Azure support for Linux applications and workloads: **infrastructure as a service (IaaS)** and **platform as a service (PaaS)**. Let's explore exactly what those terms mean, and learn about more Azure services and features you can take advantage of. Regardless of how you use Linux on Azure.
 
 ## Linux infrastructure as a service (IaaS)
 
 With IaaS, you deploy your applications and workloads to virtual machines that run in Azure. These VMs are connected to each other and to the internet by virtual network infrastructure that you define and configure.
 
-You can provision and manage VMs on an individual basis, or as *virtual machine scale sets*: groups of identical VMs managed through a central configuration interface. With scale sets, you can distribute your workloads to achieve high availability, redundancy, load balancing, and manual and automatic elastic scale.
+You can provision and manage VMs on an individual basis, or as *Virtual Machine Scale Sets*: groups of identical VMs managed through a central configuration interface. With scale sets, you can distribute your workloads to achieve high availability, redundancy, load balancing, and manual and automatic elastic scale.
 
 Azure virtual machines support most common Linux distributions. Azure Marketplace has hundreds of preconfigured Linux disk images across many popular distributions, all of which include first-class Azure platform support. You can also create or migrate your own disk images, upload them to Azure, and create virtual machines from them.
 
@@ -18,17 +18,17 @@ The Linux-based managed platforms of Azure allow you to take advantage of the be
 
 If your organization uses a Linux-powered development workflow or runs production applications on Linux, you can often deploy or migrate applications to a managed Azure platform.
 
-## Additional Azure tools and services
+## More Azure tools and services
 
-Regardless of whether you use IaaS or PaaS, Azure tools and services offer a lot of additional value to Linux workloads beyond the standard cloud benefits of elasticity, agility, and reduced maintenance.
+Regardless of whether you use IaaS or PaaS, Azure tools and services offer more value to Linux workloads beyond the standard cloud benefits of elasticity, agility, and reduced maintenance.
 
 ### Azure Resource Manager
 
-Azure Resource Manager provides a standard interface and set of concepts for managing every kind of Azure service and platform. Manage all of your resources and workloads in a single, browser-based graphical experience with the Azure portal. Automate resource provisioning and management from the command line with Azure PowerShell and the Azure CLI, available locally and in the browser via the Azure Cloud Shell. Alternatively, you can do this from your own application code by using libraries available for most common languages. Use Azure Resource Manager templates and Azure Blueprints to perform configurable, repeatable deployments of cloud infrastructure. With broad compatibility for third-party tools, you can preserve your existing investments in tools like Ansible, Chef, Puppet, Terraform, and Packer.
+Azure Resource Manager provides a standard interface and set of concepts for managing every kind of Azure service and platform. Manage all of your resources and workloads in a single, browser-based graphical experience with the Azure portal. Automate resource provisioning and management from the command line with Azure PowerShell and the Azure CLI, available locally and in the browser via the Azure Cloud Shell. Alternatively, you can automate resource management from your own application code by using libraries available for most common languages. Use Azure Resource Manager templates and Azure Blueprints to perform configurable, repeatable deployments of cloud infrastructure. With broad compatibility for third-party tools, you can preserve your existing investments in tools like Ansible, Chef, Puppet, Terraform, and Packer.
 
 ### Azure storage services
 
-Get durable, scalable, web-accessible storage with the core Azure storage services: Azure Blob storage for unstructured cloud-native storage; Azure File storage for mountable file shares; and Azure Queue storage for reliable messaging between applications. Mountable disk storage for virtual machines is managed just like other cloud resources, and Linux images in Azure Marketplace have all the required drivers built in. Ultra disk storage provides industry-leading throughput and sub-millisecond latency.
+Get durable, scalable, web-accessible storage with the core Azure storage services: Azure Blob storage for unstructured cloud-native storage; Azure File storage for mountable file shares; and Azure Queue storage for reliable messaging between applications. Mountable disk storage for virtual machines is managed just like other cloud resources, and Linux images in Azure Marketplace have all the required drivers built in. Ultra disk storage provides industry-leading throughput and submillisecond latency.
 
 ### Azure virtual networking and network appliances
 
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ Build a secure foundation for your apps and workloads with security tools and ca
 
 ### Business continuity and disaster recovery
 
-Keep your data safe and your workloads online with an Azure-supported business continuity and disaster recovery strategy. Azure Backup creates encrypted snapshot backups of all of your VMs, and supports application consistency. This ensures that applications start up as expected after restoring a snapshot. Azure Site Recovery ensures that apps and workloads remain up and running during outages, by replicating VMs across geographical regions.
+Keep your data safe and your workloads online with an Azure-supported business continuity and disaster recovery strategy. Azure Backup creates encrypted snapshot backups of all of your VMs, and supports application consistency. This recovery strategy ensures that applications start up as expected after restoring a snapshot. Azure Site Recovery ensures that apps and workloads remain up and running during outages, by replicating VMs across geographical regions.
 
 ### Azure Migrate