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Author: v-thpra

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-arc/includes/4-describe-azure-arc-enabled-kubernetes.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Contoso hosts Kubernetes clusters in multiple datacenters throughout the world,
 
 Using Azure Arc, you can connect Kubernetes clusters located anywhere to Azure. You can then manage these connected clusters in a consistent way, just as you would in Azure. Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes lets you control the cluster configuration and workloads at scale, using your Git repositories as the source of truth. This connection to Azure provides management capabilities such as inventory, monitoring, policy compliance, security, user access, and more.
 
-Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes works with any Cloud Native Computing Foundation (CNCF) certified Kubernetes clusters. Including clusters running on other public cloud providers and clusters running in on-premises datacenters.
+Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes works with any Cloud Native Computing Foundation (CNCF) certified Kubernetes clusters, including clusters running on other public cloud providers and clusters running in on-premises datacenters.
 
 ## Onboard Kubernetes clusters to Azure Arc
 

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-arc/includes/5-azure-policy-and-azure-monitor.md

@@ -45,6 +45,6 @@ Deploying the Azure Monitor agent to your Arc-enabled servers lets you:
 - Perform security monitoring in Azure by using Microsoft Defender for Cloud or Microsoft Sentinel.
 - Collect inventory and track changes by using Azure Automation Change Tracking and Inventory.
 
-For Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes, you can use Container insights, a feature of Azure Monitor that monitors the performance and health of container workloads. You can use Container insights to help you collect memory and processor metrics from controllers, nodes, and containers, in addition to gathering container logs. You can analyze the collected data for the different components in your Kubernetes clusters with a collection of views and prebuilt workbooks.
+For Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes, you can use Container insights, a feature of Azure Monitor that monitors the performance and health of container workloads. Container insights helps you collect memory and processor metrics from controllers, nodes, and containers, in addition to gathering container logs. You can analyze the collected data for the different components in your Kubernetes clusters with a collection of views and prebuilt workbooks.
 
 You can archive collected monitoring data in Azure Storage for long term analysis or compliance purposes. You can also route this data to Azure Stream Analytics, or to other services, for further analysis.

learn-pr/azure/intro-to-azure-arc/includes/5a-azure-security.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Contoso wants to protect the servers and Kubernetes clusters that are connected
 
 ## Azure Arc security with Microsoft Sentinel
 
-Microsoft Sentinel is an integrated SIEM (scalable, cloud-native, security information, and event management) and a SOAR (security orchestration, automation, and response) solution. Microsoft Sentinel delivers threat intelligence, providing a single solution for attack detection, proactive hunting, and threat response. It provides a birds-eye view across the enterprise which alleviates the stress of increasingly sophisticated attacks, increasing volumes of alerts, and long resolution time frames.
+Microsoft Sentinel is an integrated SIEM (scalable, cloud-native, security information, and event management) and a SOAR (security orchestration, automation, and response) solution. Microsoft Sentinel delivers threat intelligence, providing a single solution for attack detection, proactive hunting, and threat response. It provides a birds-eye view across the enterprise which helps alleviate the stress of increasingly sophisticated attacks.
 
 The benefits of Microsoft Sentinel include: