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 Microsoft Fabric is an end-to-end, analytics, and data platform that provides a unified solution for data storage, movement, transformation, processing, real-time event routing, and reporting. When working with a large volume of data in Fabric, some of which is highly sensitive, you must ensure that it's accurate, trustworthy, and protected throughout the data lifecycle. Data governance is the set of techniques and tools that you use to implement these requirements.
 
-Microsoft Purview has a data governance solution designed to help you discover, catalog, and manage data assets across your organization. It provides a unified view of your data landscape by scanning, and cataloging metadata from various data sources. Purview has three pillars: data governance, data security, and risk and compliance. In this module, we'll focus on data governance.
+Microsoft Purview has a data governance solution designed to help you discover, catalog, and manage data assets across your organization. It provides a unified view of your data estate by scanning, and cataloging metadata from various data sources. Purview has three pillars: data governance, data security, and risk and compliance. In this module, we'll focus on data governance.
 
-Suppose you work in a role at health care company where you're responsible for stewarding data. You use Microsoft Fabric to store, analyze, manipulate, report on data. You have sensitive patient information and need to ensure compliance with health data regulations like HIPAA. Fabric comes with several built-in data governance features. Now, you want to learn how Purview and Fabric together can help you protect data and ensure compliance.
+Suppose you work in a role at health care company where you're responsible for stewarding data. You use Microsoft Fabric to store, analyze, manipulate, and report on data. You have sensitive patient information and need to ensure compliance with health data regulations like HIPAA. Fabric comes with several built-in data governance features. Now, you want to learn how Purview and Fabric together can help you protect data and ensure compliance.
 
 In this module, you'll learn how Purview data governance features work with Fabric and how to use them for compliance, security, and discoverability.

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-Microsoft Fabric includes a set of governance and compliance capabilities. Some governance capabilities are built in to Fabric and others require using Microsoft Purview. 
+Microsoft Fabric includes a set of governance and compliance capabilities that may be sufficient for the needs of some organizations. Additional governance capabilities may be accessed in Microsoft Purview.
 
 If you work at a health care company, for example, you would have specific data governance needs because of regulatory requirements. In this unit, we'll explore Fabric's governance features so you can assess if they meet your requirements.  
 
 ## What is Microsoft Fabric?
 
 [![A diagram showing the architecture of Microsoft Fabric in a simplified form.](../media/fabric-architecture.png)](../media/fabric-architecture.png)
 
-Fabric is Microsoft's end-to-end analytics and data platform. The platform can store, move, process, ingest, transform, and analyze your data regardless of its size and current format. Once you have data in the location and format you need it, advanced business intelligence features can analyze it and generate insights to support your decision making.
+Fabric is Microsoft's end-to-end analytics and data platform. The platform can store, move, process, ingest, transform, and analyze your data regardless of its size and current format. Once you have data in the location and format you need it, advanced business intelligence features can be used to analyze data, and generate insights to support your decision making.
 
 ### OneLake
 
 In Fabric, all information is stored in a data lake, which can hold both structured and unstructured data. Microsoft's implementation of the data lake is called OneLake and is built on Azure Data Lake Storage (ADLS) generation 2. With all data residing in OneLake, there's a single copy of data that doesn't need to be moved or duplicated. This single underlying storage mechanism helps ensuring that policies and security are applied universally.
 
 ## What is data governance?
 
-The data your organization possesses and processes is often business-critical and highly sensitive. Sensitive data must be: held securely, easily available, and processed in compliance with legislation in all the locations you operate within.
+The data an organization works with is often business-critical and highly sensitive. Sensitive data must be: held securely, easily available, and processed in compliance with legislation in all the locations you operate within.
 
 Data governance is the practice of managing data to ensure the quality, consistency, security, and usability of data. It involves setting up a framework that includes roles, responsibilities, processes, policies, and standards that are used to manage data throughout its lifecycle.
 
 A data governance program usually includes:
 
-- **Auditing**: Recording where data originates from and who modifies it
-- **Evaluation**: Assessing the usefulness and accuracy of your data
-- **Documentation**: Describing the nature of your data to people who might use it
-- **Management**: Removing inaccurate data, responding to access requests, ensuring compliance with data legislation
-- **Protection**: Securing data against unauthorized access, ransomware, and other attacks
+- **Auditing**: Recording where data originates from and who modifies it.
+- **Evaluation**: Assessing the usefulness and accuracy of your data.
+- **Documentation**: Describing the nature of your data to people who might use it.
+- **Management**: Removing inaccurate data, responding to access requests, ensuring compliance with data legislation.
+- **Protection**: Securing data against unauthorized access, ransomware, and other attacks.
 
-Well governed data is trustworthy and easily available to the right people.
+Well governed data is trustworthy and easily available to the people who need to access it.
 
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-> In large organizations, there are often sets of data that are stored and managed independently in different business groups. These sets of data are called data silos and they can make it difficult to implement data governance because of different standards and policies across an organization. Removing silos by integrating data while maintains security is a vital component of data governance.
+> In large organizations, there are often sets of data that are stored and managed independently in different business groups. These sets of data are called data silos and they can make it difficult to implement data governance because of different standards and policies across an organization. Removing silos by integrating data while maintaining security is a vital component of data governance.
 
 Implementing data governance can lead to benefits such as:
 
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 ## Data governance features in Microsoft Fabric
 
-Many data governance tasks are included with your Microsoft Fabric license, without an additional license from Microsoft Purview. Let's examine some of the capabilities that are available:
+Many data governance tasks are included with your Microsoft Fabric license, without an purchasing an additional license from Microsoft Purview. Let's examine some of the native data governance capabilities that are available in Fabric:
 
 ### Managing the data estate
 

learn-pr/wwl/fabric-data-governance-purview/includes/3-why-purview-fabric.md

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 In the last unit, we reviewed the built-in governance features of Microsoft Fabric. Let's assume you work for a health care provider and new regulations mean you need stricter governance for data stored in Microsoft Fabric. Now, you want to investigate what features a Microsoft Purview license includes that can help you comply with new regulations.
 
-In this unit, you'll learn what capabilities a Microsoft Purview license adds to the built-in data governance and compliance capabilities available in Microsoft Fabric.
+In this unit, you'll learn what capabilities Microsoft Purview adds to the built-in data governance and compliance capabilities available in Microsoft Fabric.
 
 ## What is Microsoft Purview?
 
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 In the Purview Unified Catalog, you can inventory of all your data assets, their metadata, and their lineage so you can understand the topography of your data estate. You can search for and browse datasets, and view metadata, data lineage, classification, and sensitivity labels. The Unified Catalog promotes collaboration because users can annotate datasets with tags to improve discoverability.
 
-Suppose you work at a health care provider and regulations require you to control who can access patient records. In the Data Catalog, users and administrators can:
+Suppose you work at a health care provider and regulations require you to control who can access patient records. In the Unified Catalog, users and administrators can:
 
 - Discover where patient records are held by searching for keywords.
 - Label documents and items as patient records to differentiate them from other, less sensitive information.
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 DLP helps protect sensitive information with policies that automatically detect, monitor, and control the sharing or movement of sensitive data. Administrators can customize rules to block, restrict, or alert when sensitive data is transferred to prevent accidental or malicious data leaks.
 
-If, for example, you work at a health care provider, you need to ensure that users don't share patient records with external parties, either accidentally or maliciously. DLP can prevent such transfers on information labeled as patient records.
+If you worked at a health care provider, you would need to ensure that users don't share patient records with external parties, either accidentally or maliciously. DLP can prevent such transfers on information labeled as patient records.
 
 ### Microsoft Purview Audit
 

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 To govern Microsoft Fabric items using Microsoft Purview, you first need to establish a connection between Fabric and Purview. Once connected, the Microsoft Purview hub becomes available within Fabric, offering in-depth analysis and insights into your Fabric items. The Purview Hub acts as a gateway between Fabric and Purview.
 
-Suppose you work for a healthcare provider, and you have licensed Purview. Now, you want to connect it to Fabric and explore the reports that Purview generates about Fabric data in the Microsoft Purview Hub within Fabric.
+Suppose you work for a healthcare provider, and you have licensed Purview. Now, you want to connect Purview to Fabric and explore the reports on Fabric data that Purview generates in the Microsoft Purview Hub.
 
 In this unit, you'll explore the Purview hub.
 
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 ## What is the Microsoft Purview hub in Microsoft Fabric?
 
-Once Purview and Fabric are connected, the Purview hub in Fabric displays reports and insights about your Fabric items. It acts as a centralized location to begin data governance and a gateway to access more advanced features in Microsoft Purview.
+Once Purview and Fabric are connected, the Purview hub in Fabric displays reports and insights about your Fabric items. It acts as a centralized location to begin data governance and acts as a gateway to access more advanced features in Microsoft Purview.
 
 To see the Purview hub, in Microsoft Fabric, open the Fabric settings, and then select **Microsoft Purview hub**. 
 

learn-pr/wwl/fabric-data-governance-purview/includes/6-summary.md

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 ## Learn more
 
 - [Microsoft Purview documentation](/purview/)
-- [Microsoft Fabric get started documentation](/fabric/get-started/)
 - [Microsoft Fabric governance documentation](/fabric/governance/)
 - [Use Microsoft Purview to govern Microsoft Fabric](/fabric/governance/microsoft-purview-fabric)