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Author: v-thpra

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/1-introduction.yml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ metadata:
   prefetch-feature-rollout: true
   title: Introduction
   description: Introduction
-  ms.date: 11/13/2023
+  ms.date: 01/22/2025
   author: kayodeprinceMS
   ms.author: kaprince
   ms.topic: unit

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/2-full-stack-monitoring.yml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ metadata:
   prefetch-feature-rollout: true
   title: Full-stack monitoring in Azure
   description: Introduction to full-stack monitoring in Azure
-  ms.date: 11/13/2023
+  ms.date: 01/22/2025
   author: kayodeprinceMS
   ms.author: kaprince
   ms.topic: unit

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/3-azure-monitoring-options.yml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ metadata:
   prefetch-feature-rollout: true
   title: Monitoring options in Azure
   description: Explore the monitoring options available in Azure.
-  ms.date: 11/13/2023
+  ms.date: 01/22/2025
   author: kayodeprinceMS
   ms.author: kaprince
   ms.topic: unit

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/4-application-insights.yml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ metadata:
   prefetch-feature-rollout: true
   title: Monitor applications by using Application Insights
   description: Learn how to monitor applications by using Azure Monitor Application Insights.
-  ms.date: 11/13/2023
+  ms.date: 01/22/2025
   author: kayodeprinceMS
   ms.author: kaprince
   ms.topic: unit

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/5-analyze-resource-utilization.yml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ metadata:
   prefetch-feature-rollout: true
   title: Monitor VMs and containers by using insights
   description: Analyze virtual machine (VM) and container utilization and performance by using Azure Monitor VM insights and container insights.
-  ms.date: 11/13/2023
+  ms.date: 01/22/2025
   author: kayodeprinceMS
   ms.author: kaprince
   ms.topic: unit

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/6-security-center.yml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ metadata:
   prefetch-feature-rollout: true
   title: Manage infrastructure security by using Defender for Cloud
   description: Learn how to monitor, analyze, and manage infrastructure security by using Microsoft Defender for Cloud.
-  ms.date: 11/13/2023
+  ms.date: 01/22/2025
   author: rmcmurray
   ms.author: robmcm
   ms.topic: unit
@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@ content: |
 quiz:
   title: Check your knowledge
   questions:
-  - content: How can you use Defender for Cloud to prevent persistent access to your VMs?
+  - content: How can you use Defender for Cloud to prevent persistent access to your virtual machines?
     choices:
     - content: Use Azure Logic Apps.
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: You can trigger an automated alert response with Logic Apps, but not manage VM access.
+      explanation: You can trigger an automated alert response with Logic Apps, but not manage virtual machine (VM) access.
     - content: Use just-in-time (JIT) access.
       isCorrect: true
       explanation: With JIT access, your VMs are accessed based only on rules that you configure.
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ quiz:
     choices:
     - content: Use just-in-time (JIT) access.
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: Just-in-time access is used to control VM access, not respond to alerts.
+      explanation: Just-in-time access is used to control VM access, not to respond to alerts.
     - content: Use adaptive application controls.
       isCorrect: false
       explanation: You use adaptive controls to control which applications can run on your VMs, not to respond to alerts.

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/7-sentinel.yml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ metadata:
   prefetch-feature-rollout: true
   title: Manage enterprise security by using Microsoft Sentinel
   description: Learn how to monitor, analyze, and manage enterprise security by using Microsoft Sentinel.
-  ms.date: 11/13/2023
+  ms.date: 01/22/2025
   author: rmcmurray
   ms.author: robmcm
   ms.topic: unit
@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ quiz:
       explanation: You can use predefined exploration queries to investigate incidents more effectively, but they don't show which users an incident affected.
     - content: Use entities.
       isCorrect: true
-      explanation: Use entities to view users that a particular threat or malicious activity might have affected.
+      explanation: Use entities to view users that are affected in a particular threat or malicious activity.
     - content: Use the timeline.
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: You can use the timeline feature to understand the path that a threat might have taken over time, but the timeline doesn't show affected users.
+      explanation: You can use the timeline feature to understand the path that a threat takes over time, but the timeline doesn't show affected users.
 

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/8-summary.yml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ metadata:
   prefetch-feature-rollout: true
   title: Summary
   description: Summary
-  ms.date: 11/13/2023
+  ms.date: 01/22/2025
   author: kayodeprinceMS
   ms.author: kaprince
   ms.topic: unit

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/includes/6-security-center.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Because your company is a financial organization, it needs to meet the highest standards for security. Each customer or partner transaction must be completely protected from threats, and you must also respond effectively to potential threats. For example, if a virtual machine (VM) is compromised, you must act rapidly to address the issue.
+Because your company is a financial organization, it needs to meet the highest standards for security. Each customer or partner transaction must be protected completely from threats, and you must also respond effectively to potential threats. For example, if a virtual machine (VM) is compromised, you must act rapidly to address the issue.
 
 This unit describes how to protect resources and respond to threats by using Microsoft Defender for Cloud. Defender for Cloud helps you ensure that the security configuration of your infrastructure is as secure as possible.
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ To configure adaptive controls, select **Adaptive application control** on the *
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/6-security-center-update-04.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Adaptive application controls." lightbox="../media/6-security-center-update-04.png":::
 
-Select a resource group and use the **Configure application control rules** screen to target VMs and applications that should have the control rules applied.
+When you select a resource group, it opens **Configure application control rules**. On this screen, use the options to target VMs and applications that should have the control rules applied.
 
 ## Respond to threats
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ Expand any of the following sections to take action on the alert:
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/6-security-center-update-10.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Take action pane." lightbox="../media/6-security-center-update-10.png":::
 
-In the alert details, you should dismiss alerts if no action is required, for example if there are false positives. You should act to address known attacks, for example by blocking known malicious IP addresses, and you should decide which alerts require more investigation.
+In the alert details, you should dismiss alerts if no action is required, for example if there are false positives. You should act to address known attacks, for example by blocking known malicious IP addresses, and you should decide which alerts require further investigation.
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/6-security-center-update-09.png" alt-text="Screenshot of alert status." lightbox="../media/6-security-center-update-09.png":::
 

learn-pr/azure/design-monitoring-strategy-on-azure/includes/7-sentinel.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ This unit describes how Microsoft Sentinel helps monitor and respond to security
 
 - Get a detailed overview of your enterprise, potentially across multiple clouds and on-premises locations.
 - Avoid reliance on complex and disparate tools.
-- Use enterprise-grade AI, built by experts, to identify and handle threats across your organization.
+- Identify and handle threats across your organization by using enterprise-grade AI, built by experts.
 
 ## Connect your data sources to Microsoft Sentinel
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ If you hover over an entity, you see a list of *exploration queries* designed by
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/7-sentinel-12.png" alt-text="Screenshot of exploration queries." lightbox="../media/7-sentinel-12.png":::
 
-The investigation map also gives you a timeline that helps you understand which event occurred at a particular time. Use the timeline feature to understand the path that a threat might have taken over time.
+The investigation map also gives you a timeline that helps you understand which event occurred at a particular time. Use the timeline feature to understand the path that a threat might take over time.
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/7-sentinel-13.png" alt-text="Screenshot of timeline." lightbox="../media/7-sentinel-13.png":::