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docs/includes/entra-id-tutorial.md

@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ After the Azure Arc agent on the SQL Server host has completed its operation, th
 The same syntax for creating Microsoft Entra logins and users on Azure SQL Database and Azure SQL Managed Instance can now be used on SQL Server.
 
 > [!NOTE]  
-> On SQL Server, any Entra account that has the `ALTER ANY LOGIN` or `ALTER ANY USER` permission can create Microsoft Entra logins or users, respectively. Otherwise, only **SYSADMINS** can create Microsoft Entra logins or users.
+> On SQL Server, any Microsoft Entra account that has the `ALTER ANY LOGIN` or `ALTER ANY USER` permission can create Microsoft Entra logins or users, respectively. Otherwise, only accounts with `sysadmin` permissions can create Microsoft Entra logins or users.
 
 To create a login for a Microsoft Entra account, execute the following T-SQL command in the `master` database:
 

docs/sql-server/azure-arc/managed-identity.md

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ When using managed identity with SQL Server enabled by Azure Arc, consider the f
   - `Inbound connections` are logins and users connecting to SQL Server. Inbound connections can also be achieved by using [App registration](entra-authentication-setup-tutorial.md), starting in [!INCLUDE [sssql22-md](../../includes/sssql22-md.md)].
   - `Outbound connections` are SQL Server connections to Azure resources, like backup to URL, or connecting to Azure Key Vault.
 - App Registration **can't** enable a SQL Server to make outbound connections. Outbound connections need a primary managed identity assigned to the SQL Server.
-- SQL Server 2025 and later recommends using managed identity based Entra setup, as detailed in this article. Alternatively, you can configure an [app registration for SQL Server 2025.](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/sql/relational-databases/security/authentication-access/microsoft-entra-authentication-sql-server-enable-without-arc)
+- For SQL Server 2025 and later, we recommends using a managed identity based Microsoft Entra setup, as detailed in this article. Alternatively, you can configure an [app registration for SQL Server 2025.](/sql/relational-databases/security/authentication-access/microsoft-entra-authentication-sql-server-enable-without-arc)
 
 ## Prerequisites