Changed させる example to be more accurate

Author: Morgawr

src/Section2/Part4/Lesson53.md

@@ -43,12 +43,12 @@ The causative form can also be chained with the passive (せる \-\> せられ
 
 Causative-passive sentences cannot assume the meaning of “to be allowed” but only “to be forced”. 
 
-When used with する verbs, the causative form can turn an intransitive する verb, into a transitive one (する -> させる).
+When used with する verbs, the causative form can turn a する verb that is commonly used intransitively into having an explicitly transitive meaning (する -> させる).
 
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-シミュレーターが起動<b>する</b>。
-The simulator starts up. (intransitive)
+空気が乾燥<b>している</b>。
+The air is (being) dry. (intransitive)
 
-カメラアプリを起動<b>させる</b>。
-I start up the camera app. (transitive)
+果物を乾燥<b>させた</b>お菓子。
+A candy made of fruit that was dried. (transitive)
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