Priority content updates before sprint review. (#44)

Co-authored-by: Ross Buggins (NHS) <[email protected]>

Author: jakecosgrove

docs/_data/home/benefits.yml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 - heading: Lower your messaging costs
   description: |
-    Pay less for messages with our competitive rates and never pay any service or integration fees.
+    Get competitive rates on messages and pay less with no service or integration fees.
 
 - heading: Increase your operating efficiency
   description: |
@@ -9,4 +9,3 @@
 - heading: Message your audiences more effectively
   description: |
     Use a range of channels and formats to message people in the ways that work best for them.
-

docs/_data/home/heading.yml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-heading: Send NHS App messages, emails, tests and letters to patients and the public
+heading: Send NHS App messages, emails, texts and letters to patients and the public
 description: |
   You can use NHS Notify if you work in NHS England and support direct care.
 image: landing-main-image.svg

docs/_data/home/how-it-works.yml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 - heading: Write your messages
   description: |
     Create and edit reusable templates for each message channel:
-    - NHS App messages
+    - NHS App messages and notifications
     - emails
     - text messages (SMS)
     - letters

docs/_data/home/pricing.yml

@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
   pricing: Free
 
 - heading: Texts (SMS)
-  description: up to 30,000 free texts then
+  description: each text message
   pricing: 2.27p
 
 - heading: Letters
   description: A4, 2 sides, sent 2nd class
-  pricing: 54p
+  pricing: 61p

docs/pages/pricing/letters.md

@@ -18,13 +18,13 @@ Prices include:
 - double-sided black and white printing
 - C5 size envelopes with an address window
 
-| Paper     | 1st class            | 2nd class            |
-| --------- | -------------------- | -------------------- |
-| 1 sheet   | Up to 97 pence + VAT | Up to 61 pence + VAT |
-| 2 sheets  | Up to £1.01 + VAT | Up to 65 pence + VAT |
-| 3 sheets  | Up to £1.05 + VAT | Up to 68 pence + VAT |
-| 4 sheets  | Up to £1.11 + VAT | Up to 75 pence + VAT |
-| 5 sheets  | Up to £1.15 + VAT    | Up to 79 pence + VAT |
+| Paper    | 1st class            | 2nd class            |
+| -------- | -------------------- | -------------------- |
+| 1 sheet  | Up to 97 pence + VAT | Up to 61 pence + VAT |
+| 2 sheets | Up to £1.01 + VAT    | Up to 65 pence + VAT |
+| 3 sheets | Up to £1.05 + VAT    | Up to 68 pence + VAT |
+| 4 sheets | Up to £1.11 + VAT    | Up to 75 pence + VAT |
+| 5 sheets | Up to £1.15 + VAT    | Up to 79 pence + VAT |
 
 ## Letters in accessible formats
 
@@ -35,7 +35,6 @@ Learn more about NHS Notify’s accessible letter formats.
 | Accessible format           | Cost                      |
 | --------------------------- | ------------------------- |
 | Large print (16 point font) | Same as a standard letter |
-| Easy read                   | £1.70 + VAT               |
 | Braille                     | £1.98 + VAT               |
 | Audio CD                    | £2.80 + VAT               |
 

docs/pages/pricing/pricing.md

@@ -15,15 +15,13 @@ There’s also:
 
 - no monthly charge
 - no setup or integration fee
-- no procurement cost
+- no procurement fees
 
 Find out [how to pay]({% link pages/pricing/how-to-pay.md %}).
 
 ## Text messages (SMS)
 
-NHS England organisations and service have an annual allowance of free text messages.
-
-When you've used your annual allowance, it costs 2.27 pence (plus VAT) per text message.
+It costs 2.27 pence (plus VAT) for every text message you send.
 
 {% include components/action-link.html
     url='/pricing/text-messages'
@@ -32,7 +30,7 @@ When you've used your annual allowance, it costs 2.27 pence (plus VAT) per text
 
 ## Letters
 
-It costs up to 61p (plus VAT) to send a 1 sheet letter with both sides printed using 2nd class postage.
+It costs up to 61p (plus VAT) to send 1 A4 sheet letter with both sides printed using 2nd class postage.
 
 {% include components/action-link.html
     url='/pricing/letters'

docs/pages/pricing/text-messages.md

@@ -9,14 +9,7 @@ nav_order: 2
 permalink: /pricing/text-messages
 ---
 
-NHS England organisations and services have an annual allowances of free text messages.
-
-The current allowance is:
-
-- 30,000 free text messages for national services
-- 10,000 free text messages for regional services
-
-When a service has used its annual allowance, it costs 2.27 pence (plus VAT) for each text message you send.
+It costs 2.27 pence (plus VAT) for each text message you send.
 
 You may pay more for each message, if you:
 
@@ -29,7 +22,7 @@ You may pay more for each message, if you:
 If a text message is longer than 160 characters (including spaces), it counts as more than one message.
 
 | Message length       | Charge          |
-| -------------------- | ----------------|
+| -------------------- | --------------- |
 | Up to 306 characters | 2 text messages |
 | Up to 459 characters | 3 text messages |
 | Up to 612 characters | 4 text messages |
@@ -44,7 +37,7 @@ Using them can increase the cost of sending text messages.
 
 ## Accents and accented characters
 
-Some languages, such as Welsh, use accented characters.
+Some languages use accented characters.
 
 The following accented characters do not affect the cost of sending text messages: Ä, É, Ö, Ü, à, ä, é, è, ì, ò, ö, ù, ü.