Update privacy.html

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@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ <h1>Your privacy on NHS Register with a GP Surgery</h1>
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           <h2 class="nhsuk-u-visually-hidden">Contents</h2>
 
-          <p>Version 1.78, October 2023</p>
+          <p>Version 1.8, October 2023</p>
 
           <p>Contents:</p>
 
@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@ <h2>1. How we use your personal information</h2>
           <h3>1.1 In this privacy policy the following terms have the following meanings:</h3>
 
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-            <li>Controller: "The person or organisation (alone or with others) who decides what personal data to process and how it will be used".</li>
-            <li>Processor: "An organisation which processes personal data on behalf of, and under the instruction, of the controller". </li>
-            <li>Special Category Data: "Sensitive personal data given special protection in data protection law including personal data about your health".</li>
+            <li>Controller: "The person or organisation (alone or with others) who decides what personal data to process and how it will be used"</li>
+            <li>Processor: "An organisation which processes personal data on behalf of, and under the instruction, of the controller"</li>
+            <li>Special Category Data: "Sensitive personal data given special protection in data protection law including personal data about your health"</li>
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@@ -124,6 +124,7 @@ <h2>3. What information we collect about you</h2>
                     <td>NHS Register with a GP Surgery performance data</td>
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                       <p>IP addresses are transmitted to Adobe as part of performance data but are not stored so users cannot be identified.</p>
+                      <p>We also measure how many connecting IP addresses do not have JavaScript enabled on their device to improve the accessibility of the service. For more information see our <a href="https://gp-registration.nhs.uk/gpregistration/legal/cookies">cookie policy</a>.</p>
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@@ -135,7 +136,7 @@ <h2>3. What information we collect about you</h2>
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                     <td>NHS Register with a GP Surgery demographic data</td>
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-                      <p>he personal data you provide to register with a GP surgery such as your name, address, date of birth, NHS number, your email address, contact telephone numbers, your sex and ethnicity.</p>
+                      <p>The personal data you provide to register with a GP surgery such as your name, address, date of birth, NHS number, your email address, contact telephone numbers, your sex and ethnicity.</p>
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