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       <p>Use this service to register yourself or someone else with a GP surgery for the first time or to transfer to a new GP surgery.</p>
-      <p>If you think you need medical help right now visit <a href="https://111.nhs.uk/">NHS 111 online.</a></p>
-      <p>If you are already registered with a GP surgery you can access some health and prescription services using <a href="https://www.nhs.uk/nhs-services/gps/online-health-and-prescription-services/">NHS online services.</a></p>
+      <p>Do not use this service if you:</p>
+      <ul>
+        <li>need medical help right now. Instead visit <a href="https://111.nhs.uk/">NHS 111 online.</a></li>
+        <li>want to make an urgent appointment. Instead you should contact your current GP.</li>
+        <li>want a temporary registration of less than 3 months. <a href="https://www.nhs.uk/nhs-services/gps/how-to-register-with-a-gp-surgery">Find out about temporary registrations</a>.</li>
+        <li>are already registered with a GP surgery and want other <a href="https://www.nhs.uk/nhs-services/gps/online-health-and-prescription-services/">NHS online health and prescription services</a>.</li>
+      </ul>
 
       <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-l">How long it takes</h2>
       <p>It takes around 15 minutes to complete a registration.</p> 
-      <p>Your chosen GP surgery should register you within 5 days of receiving your details.</p>
+      <p>Your preferred GP surgery should register you within 1 to 5 working days of receiving your details.</p>
 
-      <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-l">Before you start</h2>
-      <p>If you have your NHS number, it could make registration easier.</p> 
-      <p><a href="#">Find your NHS number</a></p>
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-      <details class="nhsuk-details nhsuk-u-margin-top-8">
-        <summary class="nhsuk-details__summary">
-          <span class="nhsuk-details__summary-text">
-            Temporary registrations
-          </span>
-        </summary>
-        <div class="nhsuk-details__text">
-          <p>You can temporarily register with a GP surgery for up to 3 months. This can be helpful if you're living away from home for a short period and do not want to change your existing GP surgery.</p> 
-          <p>You should visit the GP surgery you want to register with and ask them for a temporary services form, also called a GMS3.</p>
-          <p><a href="#">Find out about temporary registrations.</a></p>
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-      </details>
+      <!--<h2 class="nhsuk-heading-l">Before you start</h2>
+      <p>We may ask you for:</p> 
+      <ul>
+        <li>details of your previous GP surgery</li>
+        <li>basic health and medical information</li>
+      </ul>
+      <p>The information you provide will be used to match you to your medical record. It will also help the GP surgery to offer relevant and appropriate healthcare services.</p>-->
 
       <details class="nhsuk-details">
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           <p>For multiple or family registrations you must complete and submit a registration for each person.</p> 
-          <p>If you are registering children aged 15 years and under it is important that you register yourself first.</p>
+          <p>If you are registering children aged 15 years or under it is important that you register yourself first.</p>
         </div>
       </details>