Updates to product-page.html (#306)

Trying various text tweaks.

Author: Anna-Sutton

app/views/product-page.html

@@ -21,12 +21,12 @@ <h1 class="nhsuk-heading-l nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-5">Record NHS vaccinations safe
           <p class="nhsuk-body">Use this service to record COVID-19, flu, RSV and pertussis vaccinations.</p>
 
           {{ button({
-            text: "Create an account",
+            text: "Sign up for your pharmacy",
             href: "#find-out-more",
             classes: "nhsuk-button--reverse nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-3"
           }) }}
 
-          <p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-0">Or <a href="/okta-sign-in" class="nhsuk-link app-link--reverse">log in</a></p>
+          <p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-0">Or <a href="/okta-sign-in" class="nhsuk-link app-link--reverse">log in</a> if you've used it before</p>
         </div>
       </div>
       <div class="nhsuk-grid-column-one-half nhsuk-u-one-half-tablet">
@@ -40,16 +40,16 @@ <h1 class="nhsuk-heading-l nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-5">Record NHS vaccinations safe
     <div class="nhsuk-main-wrapper">
       <div class="nhsuk-grid-row">
         <div class="nhsuk-grid-column-one-third">
-          <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Streamlined journey</h2>
-          <p>Capture only essential information to reduce the time taken to record each vaccination.</p>
+          <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Improve efficiency</h2>
+          <p>Save time by only capturing the essential information needed for an NHS vaccination record.</p>
         </div>
         <div class="nhsuk-grid-column-one-third">
-          <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Timely data sharing</h2>
-          <p>See a patient’s vaccination history. Records sent to the patient’s GP automatically.</p>
+          <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Share data seamlessly</h2>
+          <p>Every vaccination you record appears automatically in the GP system the next day.</p>
         </div>
         <div class="nhsuk-grid-column-one-third">
-          <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Comprehensive reporting</h2>
-          <p>Create reports for a time frame of your choice, filtered by vaccine type or location.</p>
+          <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Create bespoke reports</h2>
+          <p>Generate comprehensive reports to support your operational needs.</p>
         </div>
       </div>
     </div>
@@ -63,17 +63,18 @@ <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Comprehensive reporting</h2>
 
         <h2 class="nhuk-heading-l nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-5">Get started</h2>
 
-        <h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m">Pharmacies</h3>
-        <p>All pharmacies in England commissioned to deliver COVID-19 and flu vaccinations can now use this service for free.</p>
+        <h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m">Pharmacies can sign up now</h3>
+        <p>All community pharmacies in England commissioned to deliver COVID-19 and flu vaccinations can use this service for free.</p>
 
-        <p class="nhsuk-body">The service is integrated with the NHS Business Services Authority (BSA) to make sure you are paid for each vaccination delivered.</p>
+        <p class="nhsuk-body">The service is fully integrated with NHS Business Services Authority (NHSBSA) to make sure you are paid for each vaccination delivered.</p>
 
         <p>If you own or run a pharmacy:</p>
         {{ actionLink({
-          text: "Start using the service for COVID-19 and flu vaccinations",
+          text: "Sign up",
           href: "/apply/onboarding0"
         }) }}
-
+        <p>or <a href="#">try our demo site</a></p>
+        
         <hr class="nhsuk-section-break nhsuk-section-break--l nhsuk-section-break--visible">
 
         <h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m">Maternity services</h3>