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Updates to product-page.html (#306)
Trying various text tweaks.
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<p class="nhsuk-body">Use this service to record COVID-19, flu, RSV and pertussis vaccinations.</p>
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{{ button({
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text: "Create an account",
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text: "Sign up for your pharmacy",
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href: "#find-out-more",
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classes: "nhsuk-button--reverse nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-3"
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}) }}
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<p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-0">Or <a href="/okta-sign-in" class="nhsuk-link app-link--reverse">log in</a></p>
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<p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-0">Or <a href="/okta-sign-in" class="nhsuk-link app-link--reverse">log in</a> if you've used it before</p>
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<div class="nhsuk-grid-column-one-half nhsuk-u-one-half-tablet">
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<div class="nhsuk-main-wrapper">
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<div class="nhsuk-grid-row">
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<div class="nhsuk-grid-column-one-third">
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<h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Streamlined journey</h2>
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<p>Capture only essential information to reduce the time taken to record each vaccination.</p>
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<h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Improve efficiency</h2>
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<p>Save time by only capturing the essential information needed for an NHS vaccination record.</p>
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<div class="nhsuk-grid-column-one-third">
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<h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Timely data sharing</h2>
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<p>See a patient’s vaccination history. Records sent to the patient’s GP automatically.</p>
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<h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Share data seamlessly</h2>
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<p>Every vaccination you record appears automatically in the GP system the next day.</p>
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</div>
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<div class="nhsuk-grid-column-one-third">
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<h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Comprehensive reporting</h2>
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<p>Create reports for a time frame of your choice, filtered by vaccine type or location.</p>
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<h2 class="nhsuk-heading-s nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">Create bespoke reports</h2>
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<p>Generate comprehensive reports to support your operational needs.</p>
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<h2 class="nhuk-heading-l nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-5">Get started</h2>
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<h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m">Pharmacies</h3>
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<p>All pharmacies in England commissioned to deliver COVID-19 and flu vaccinations can now use this service for free.</p>
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<h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m">Pharmacies can sign up now</h3>
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<p>All community pharmacies in England commissioned to deliver COVID-19 and flu vaccinations can use this service for free.</p>
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<p class="nhsuk-body">The service is integrated with the NHS Business Services Authority (BSA) to make sure you are paid for each vaccination delivered.</p>
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<p class="nhsuk-body">The service is fully integrated with NHS Business Services Authority (NHSBSA) to make sure you are paid for each vaccination delivered.</p>
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<p>If you own or run a pharmacy:</p>
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{{ actionLink({
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text: "Start using the service for COVID-19 and flu vaccinations",
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text: "Sign up",
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href: "/apply/onboarding0"
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}) }}
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<p>or <a href="#">try our demo site</a></p>
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<hr class="nhsuk-section-break nhsuk-section-break--l nhsuk-section-break--visible">
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<h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m">Maternity services</h3>

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