Laura's review

[lauracowen]

I've not run the steps myself; I've only read the guide but it looks great. Thank you.

I've made a few comments/suggestions below but they're mostly trivial as I think it's in good shape:

• "MicroProfile Telemetry adopts OpenTelemetry to enable" - maybe "MicroProfile Telemetry uses OpenTelemetry to enable"? Trivial - I just found "adopts" a slightly formal and out-of-place wording. But it might just be me.
• "Setting the otel.sdk.disabled property to false property" - I think that second "property" shouldn't be there?
• "Telemetry such as Liberty startup logs and JVM metrics is generated when the servers start. " - maybe switch round to "When the servers start, telemetry such as Liberty startup logs and JVM metrics is generated. " or "Telemetry, such as Liberty startup logs and JVM metrics, is generated when the servers start. " or something like that. It took me a couple of reads to parse it as it is.
• "with kind client calling" - should "kind" be "Kind"? And then monospace font for either or both words?
• "View application-level metrics." - should be a colon (:) not a full-stop/period (.) I think?

[shin19991207]

Hi @lauracowen
The comments above have been addressed in #40