You have this sentence (last bullet point) :
The process and deployment views are meant to collectively describe NFRs.
But there is no "deployment view" ! The views that you describe in the text are :
- logical view
- process view
- development view
- physical view
and 5) Scenarios
So what do you want to say in the last bullet point? Do you want to say: "The process and development views are meant to collectively describe NFRs."? Or something else?