Review of sample: Azure Table Persistence Usage

Author: helenktsai

samples/azure/azure-table/transactions/sample.md

@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
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-title: Azure Table Persistence Usage with transactions
+title: Azure Table Persistence Usage with Transactions
 summary: Using Azure Table Persistence to store sagas and outbox records atomically
-reviewed: 2022-11-17
+reviewed: 2025-03-06
 component: ASP
 related:
  - nservicebus/sagas
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-This sample shows a client/server scenario using saga and outbox persistences to store records atomically by leveraging transactions.
+This sample demonstrates a client/server scenario using sagas and outbox persistences to store records atomically by leveraging transactions.
 
 ## Projects
 
@@ -25,31 +25,31 @@ The shared message contracts used by all endpoints.
 * Receive the `StartOrder` message and initiate an `OrderSaga`.
 * `OrderSaga` requests a timeout with an instance of `CompleteOrder` with the saga data.
 * Receive the `OrderShipped` message with a custom header.
-* `OrderSaga` publishes an `OrderCompleted` event when the `CompleteOrder` timeout fires.
+* `OrderSaga` publishes an `OrderCompleted` event when the `CompleteOrder` timeout is triggered.
 
 ### Persistence config
 
 Configure the endpoint to use Azure Table Persistence.
 
 snippet: AzureTableConfig
 
-The order id is used as a partition key.
+The OrderId is used as the partition key.
 
 ## Behaviors
 
-Most messages implement `IProvideOrderId` and thus a logical behavior can use the provided order identification as a partition key.
+Most messages implement `IProvideOrderId` enabling the logical behavior of using the provided OrderId as the partition key.
 
 snippet: BehaviorUsingIProvideOrderId
 
-One handler publishes an event that doesn't implement `IProvideOrderId` but adds a custom header to indicate the order identification. The handler also creates `OrderShippingInformation` by participating in the transactional batch provided by NServiceBus.
+One of the handlers publishes an event that does not implement `IProvideOrderId` but adds a custom header containing the OrderId. The handler also creates `OrderShippingInformation` as part of the transactional batch provided by NServiceBus.
 
 snippet: UseHeader
 
-The header can be used to determine the partition key in the transport receive context
+The header allows the partition key to be determined within the transport receive context.
 
 snippet: BehaviorUsingHeader
 
-Finally the above behaviors are registered in the pipeline.
+Finally, the above behaviors are registered in the pipeline.
 
 snippet: BehaviorRegistration