Update RFC0016-Census-Telemetry.md

Author: SteveL-MSFT

1-Draft/RFC0016-Census-Telemetry.md

@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ RFC: RFC0016
 Author: Steve Lee, Jim Truher
 Status: Draft
 SupercededBy: n/a
-Version: 0.2
+Version: 0.3
 Area: Host
-Comments Due: 4/22/2017
+Comments Due: Done
 Feedback: https://github.com/PowerShell/PowerShell-Language-RFC/issues/#
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@@ -21,10 +21,12 @@ The platform (Windows, Linux, Mac) usage data helps to prioritize new feature wo
 ## Specification
 
 On every startup of the PowerShell Console host, telemetry will be sent via [ApplicationInsights](https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/services/application-insights/) to collect the following information:
-- A SHA256 hash of System.Management.Automation.dll
-- Environment.OSVersion.VersionString
+- [System.Runtime.InteropServices.RuntimeInformation]::OSDescription (equivalent to `uname -a` on Unix)
 - GitCommitId (from $psversiontable)
 
+Telemetry is only collect if the file DELETE_ME_TO_DISABLE_CONSOLEHOST_TELEMETRY exists in $PSHome.
+Eventually, we want to adopt [RFC0015 Startup Configuration](https://github.com/PowerShell/PowerShell-RFC/blob/master/1-Draft/RFC0015-PowerShell-StartupConfig.md) as the way to enable/disable telemetry.
+
 ## Design
 
 ApplicationInsights provides a mechanism for sending a [`CustomEvent`](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/application-insights/app-insights-api-custom-events-metrics) which is essentially three elements: