update Open Source Docs from Roblox internal teams

Author: rbx-open-source-docs[bot]

content/en-us/marketplace/publish-to-marketplace.md

@@ -245,14 +245,6 @@ The following location options are available for all items:
 </tbody>
 </table>
 
-### Schedule item sale
-
-To schedule the sale of your asset in the **Manage Item** page, click **Schedule Sale** under the **On Sale** toggle and enter a **Sale Start** date and an optional **Sale End** date. If you don't enter an end date, the item is on sale indefinitely.
-
-You can use scheduling to sell both Limited and Non-Limited assets.
-
-You can schedule sales up to 30 days in advance.
-
 ### Publish item
 
 When first publishing your asset, select the **Publish Item** button at the end of the form to pay the [publishing fee](../marketplace/marketplace-fees-and-commissions.md#publishing-advance) and list your item on sale.

content/en-us/reference/engine/classes/DataModel.yaml

@@ -772,16 +772,13 @@ methods:
       Returns true if the client has finished loading the game for the first
       time.
     description: |
-      This function returns true if the client has finished loading the game for
-      the first time.
-
       When all initial `Class.Instance|Instances` in the game have finished
-      replicating to the client, this function will return true.
+      replicating to the client, this function returns true.
 
       Unless they are parented to `Class.ReplicatedFirst`,
-      `Class.LocalScript|LocalScripts` will not run while the game has not
-      loaded. The following snippet, ran from a `Class.LocalScript` in
-      `Class.ReplicatedFirst` will yield until the game has loaded:
+      `Class.LocalScript|LocalScripts` do not run until the game has loaded.
+      The following snippet, run from a `Class.LocalScript` in
+      `Class.ReplicatedFirst` yields until the game has loaded:
 
       ```lua
       if not game:IsLoaded() then
@@ -791,10 +788,12 @@ methods:
 
       See also:
 
+      - [Replication order](../../../scripting/attributes.md#replication-order)
+        for a more detailed summary of the loading process.
       - `Class.DataModel.Loaded`, an event that fires when the game has loaded
       - `Class.Instance:WaitForChild()`, a function which can be used to wait
         for an individual `Class.Instance` to replicate without having to wait
-        for the whole game to
+        for the whole game to finish loading.
     code_samples:
       - Custom-Loading-Screen
     parameters: []
@@ -998,30 +997,28 @@ events:
     summary: |
       Fires on the client when the game finishes loading for the first time.
     description: |
-      This event fires on the client when the game finishes loading for the
-      first time.
-
-      The Loaded event fires when all initial `Class.Instance|Instances` in the
-      game have finished replicating to the client.
+      This event fires on the client when all initial `Class.Instance|Instances`
+      in the game have finished replicating to the client.
 
       Unless they are parented to `Class.ReplicatedFirst`,
-      `Class.LocalScript|LocalScripts` will not run prior to this event firing.
-      The following snippet, ran from a `Class.LocalScript` in
-      `Class.ReplicatedFirst`, will yield until the game has loaded:
+      `Class.LocalScript|LocalScripts` do not run until the game has loaded.
+      The following snippet, run from a `Class.LocalScript` in
+      `Class.ReplicatedFirst` yields until the game has loaded:
 
-      ```
+      ```lua
       if not game:IsLoaded() then
           game.Loaded:Wait()
       end
       ```
 
       See also:
 
-      - `Class.DataModel:IsLoaded()`, a function that returns if the game is
-        loaded or not
+      - [Replication order](../../../scripting/attributes.md#replication-order)
+        for a more detailed summary of the loading process.
+      - `Class.DataModel.Loaded`, an event that fires when the game has loaded
       - `Class.Instance:WaitForChild()`, a function which can be used to wait
         for an individual `Class.Instance` to replicate without having to wait
-        for the whole game to load.
+        for the whole game to finish loading.
     code_samples:
     parameters: []
     tags: []

content/en-us/scripting/attributes.md

@@ -38,11 +38,11 @@ The Roblox Engine doesn't guarantee the order in which objects are replicated fr
 
 1. When it finishes, the `Class.DataModel.Loaded|game.Loaded` event fires and `Class.DataModel:IsLoaded()|game:IsLoaded()` returns true.
 
-1. `LocalScripts` in `StarterPlayerScripts` run, as well as client `Scripts` in `Class.ReplicatedStorage`. These scripts can safely get objects from `StarterPlayerScripts` and `ReplicatedStorage` without using `WaitForChild()`.
+1. `LocalScripts` in `Players.Player.PlayerScripts` (copied from `StarterPlayerScripts`) run, as well as client `Scripts` in `Class.ReplicatedStorage`. These scripts can safely get objects from `ReplicatedStorage` without using `WaitForChild()`.
 
 1. The player's `Class.Player.Character|Character` model spawns in the experience.
 
-1. `LocalScripts` in `StarterCharacterScripts` run.
+1. `LocalScripts` in `Workspace.Character` (copied from `StarterCharacterScripts`) run.
 
 If your experience uses [instance streaming](../workspace/streaming.md) (`Class.Workspace.StreamingEnabled`), some or most objects might not have loaded into the workspace, so using `WaitForChild()` to access workspace objects becomes an even more important safety measure. In particular, see [Stream in](../workspace/streaming.md#stream-in) and [Per-model streaming controls](../workspace/streaming.md#per-model-streaming-controls) for additional information on loading and tuning streaming behavior.