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A typo and a few wording changes.
This is only to improve English language without any changes w.r.t. content. Signed-off-by: Kurt Garloff <kurt@garloff.de>
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Standards/scs-0121-w1-Availability-Zones-Standard.md

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The standard will not preclude small deployments and edge deployments, that both will not meet the requirement for being divided into multiple Availability Zones.
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Thus multiple Availability Zones are not always present.
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Somtimes there can just be a single Availability Zones.
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Somtimes there can just be a single Availability Zone.
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Because of that, there will be no automated tests to search for AZs.
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## Required Documentation
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4. The redundancy in external connection within each AZ MUST be documented.
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5. The redundancy in core routers within each AZ MUST be documented.
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All of these requirements will either not change at all like the fire zones or it is very unlikely for them to change like redundant internet connection.
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Because of this documentation must only be provided in the following cases:
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After the initial setup, these requirements typically do not change at all (like the fire zones) or are very unlikely to change (like redundant internet connection).
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Because of this, documentation needs to only be provided in the following cases:
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1. When a new deployment with multiple AZs should be tested for compliance.
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2. When there are physical changes in a deplyoment, which already provided the documentation: the changes needs to be documented and provided as soon as possible.
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1. When a new deployment with multiple AZs should be tested for compliance initially.
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2. When there are physical changes in a deployment, which already provided the documentation: the changes needs to be documented and provided as soon as possible.
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### Alternative Documentation
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## Physical Audits
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In cases where it is reasonable to mistrust the provided documentation, a physical audit by a natural person - called auditor - send by e.g. the [OSBA](https://osb-alliance.de/) should be performed.
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The CSP of the deployment, which needs such an audit, should grant access to the auditor to the physical infrastructure and should show them all necessary IaaS-Layer configurations, that are needed to verify compliance to this standard.
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When reasons exist to mistrust the provided documentation, a physical audit by a natural person - called auditor - sent by e.g. the [OSBA](https://osb-alliance.de/) should be performed.
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The CSP of the deployment in need of such an audit should grant access for the auditor to the physical infrastructure and should show them all necessary IaaS-Layer configurations that are needed to verify compliance to this standard.

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