control of data

Author: drbruced12

preface.rst

@@ -19,8 +19,8 @@ the know-how for making that happen.
 
 At the same time edge applications are moving to the forefront,
 increasing importance is also being placed on *digital sovereignty*,
-the ability of nations and organizations to control their own destiny.
-Cloud technology is important for running today's workloads, but
+the ability of nations and organizations to control their own destiny
+and their data. Cloud technology is important for running today's workloads, but
 access to that technology does not necessarily have to be bundled with
 outsourcing operational control.