Smart Edge Open

Author: llpeterson

intro.rst

@@ -722,7 +722,7 @@ hopefully not at the expense of general applicability.
 
 .. admonition:: Further Reading 
 
-   `Smart Open Edge 
+   `Smart Edge Open 
    <https://www.openness.org/>`__. 
 
 1.4 Future of the Sysadmin

preface.rst

@@ -43,11 +43,7 @@ Our roadmap may not be the right one for all circumstances, but it
 does shine a light on the fundamental challenges and trade-offs
 involved in operationalizing a cloud. As we can attest based on our
 experience, it’s a complicated design space with an overabundance of
-terminology and storylines to untangle. Whether you plan to stand up
-your own edge cloud in an enterprise, or end up selecting a cloud
-provider to do that for you, understanding everything that goes into
-such an endeavor is a critical first step in the decision-making
-process.
+terminology and storylines to untangle. 
 
 Intended Audience
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