Merge pull request #1583 from TechnologyEnhancedLearning/Develop/Fixes/TD-6410-Acceptence-policy-wordings

corrected the wording

Author: swapnamol-abraham

LearningHub.Nhs.WebUI/Views/Policies/AcceptableUsePolicy.cshtml

@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-padding-left-7 nhsuk-u-padding-bottom-2 nhsuk-u-margin-0">4.5.2.2 which requires a subscription or payment to gain access to such content;</p>
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-padding-left-7 nhsuk-u-padding-bottom-2 nhsuk-u-margin-0">4.5.2.3 in which the user has a commercial interest;</p>
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-padding-left-7 nhsuk-u-padding-bottom-2 nhsuk-u-margin-0">4.5.2.4 which promotes a business name and/or logo;</p>
-                    <p class="nhsuk-u-padding-left-7 nhsuk-u-padding-bottom-2 nhsuk-u-margin-0">4.5.2.5 which contains a link to an app via iOS or Google Play or similar; or</p>
+                    <p class="nhsuk-u-padding-left-7 nhsuk-u-padding-bottom-2 nhsuk-u-margin-0">4.5.2.5 which contains a link to an app via iOS, Google Play or similar; or</p>
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-padding-left-7 nhsuk-u-padding-bottom-2 nhsuk-u-margin-0">4.5.2.6 which has as its purpose or effect the collection and sharing of personal data;</p>
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-padding-left-4 nhsuk-u-padding-bottom-2 nhsuk-u-margin-0">4.5.3 be irrelevant to the purpose or aims of the Platform or while addressing relevant subject matter, contain an irrelevant, unsuitable or inappropriate slant (for example relating to potentially controversial opinions or beliefs of any kind intended to influence others);</p>
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-padding-left-4 nhsuk-u-padding-bottom-2 nhsuk-u-margin-0">4.5.4 be defamatory of any person;</p>
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">11.3 Course Managers shall also take responsibility for the following:</p>
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2"> 11.3.1 <strong>Clear Expectations:</strong> Set clear local forum rules within their course at the outset, compliantly with this Acceptable Use Policy, which includes expected behaviour, response times and moderation practices. </p>
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">11.3.2 <strong>Inclusive Practice:</strong> Encourage participation from all learners/users and foster a respectful, inclusive environment that values diverse perspectives. This should involve reminding local forum users of the appropriate measures of this Acceptable Use Policy and potentially removing Contributions that infringe the rules of this Acceptable Use Policy including under paragraph 4.5 above.</p>
-                    <p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">11.3.3 <strong>Data Protection and Safety:</strong> Ensure that no sensitive or personal data is shared, requested or stored in local forums, including by promptly removing any inclusions or requests for such material and notifying NHS England promptly of any potential breaches by contacting NHS England’s Data Protection Officer team via england.dpo@nhs.net; and ensure that risks are actively managed and the local forums are maintained as a safe space for discussion.</p>
+                    <p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">11.3.3 <strong>Data Protection and Safety:</strong> Ensure that no sensitive or personal data is shared, requested or stored in local forums, including by promptly removing any inclusions or requests for such material and notifying NHS England promptly of any potential breaches by contacting NHS England’s Data Protection Officer team via <a href="mailto:[email protected]">england.dpo@nhs.net</a>; and ensure that risks are actively managed and the local forums are maintained as a safe space for discussion.</p>
                     <p class="nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-2">11.4 All users must comply with this Acceptable Use Policy. Breaches may result  in removal of Contributions and/or withdrawal or suspension of user access without notice. </p>
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