Final fix before release

Author: Ttiki

sections/conceptual_proposal.tex

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ \subsection{Feeding data}
 \subsection{Data workflow}
 \label{subsec:conceptualimplementation_dataworkflow}
 
-Our workflow, as depicted in Figure \ref{fig:dataworkflow}, is designed to systematically transform raw data into actionable insights.
+Our workflow, as depicted in Figure \ref{fig:dataworkflow}, is designed to systematically transform raw data into actionable insights. Even though we are looking to find excellence in registration for students, this model could be used and/or improved as a security measure to detect students at risk of dropping out.
 
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@@ -67,6 +67,6 @@ \subsection{Data workflow}
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 \subsection{Validation and Expected Outcomes}
-We anticipate that this comprehensive workflow will yield a robust predictive model capable of identifying students at risk and informing targeted interventions. We will gauge the efficiency of our model through rigorous validation techniques such as \acrfull{roc}, \acrfull{pca}, etc. to ensure the reliability of our predictions. 
+We anticipate that this workflow will yield a robust model capable of identifying excellent students. We will gauge the efficiency of our model through rigorous validation techniques such as \acrfull{roc}, \acrfull{pca}, etc. to ensure the reliability of our predictions. 
 
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