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@@ -70,8 +70,7 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
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                 <Article>
                     <h1>Pinpoint aims to advance large-scale neuroscience research with intuitive browser-based
-                        planning and
-                        automation tools for efficient and reproducible neurosurgery.
+                        planning and automation tools.
                     </h1>
                 </Article>
             </div>
@@ -87,9 +86,7 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
                         require extensive expertise to operate.</h3>
                     <p>Modern neuroscientists need tools that enable the study of the whole brain to better
                         understand
-                        human behavior and cure neurodegenerative diseases that affect the whole brain like
-                        Parkinson's
-                        and Alzheimer's.</p>
+                        human behavior and cure neurodegenerative diseases that affect the whole brain.</p>
                 </Article>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -117,7 +114,7 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
                 <Article>
                     <h2>Simulate your equipment</h2>
                     <h3>Pinpoint includes electrophysiology probes, viral injectors, 2-photon lasers, and pipettes.</h3>
-                    <p>Custom equipment can be added as well.</p>
+                    <p>Custom equipment and craniotomies can be modeled side-by-side, saving time during procedures.</p>
                 </Article>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -134,7 +131,7 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
             <div class="sticky top-1/3">
                 <Article>
                     <h2>See the brain in detail</h2>
-                    <h3>Get exact surface coordinates, accessed brain regions, and planar slices.</h3>
+                    <p>Extract brain surface coordinates for surgical targeting, export brain region information, and explore planar slices in each brain atlas.</p>
                 </Article>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -189,7 +186,7 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
                 <div class="sticky top-1/3">
                     <Article>
                         <h2>Let the robots do the heavy lifting</h2>
-                        <h3>Pinpoint can control neurosurgery robotic manipulators to automatically run your plans.</h3>
+                        <h3>Pinpoint controls robotic manipulators to automatically perform your surgery.</h3>
                         <ul>
                             <li>Sensapex uMp-4</li>
                             <li>Sensapex uMp-3</li>
@@ -215,8 +212,7 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
             <div class="sticky top-1/3">
                 <Article>
                     <h2>Automation improves accuracy and efficiency</h2>
-                    <h3>Robotic manipulators can make highly precise movements and perform multiple tasks in parallel.
-                        These are important for enabling large-scale studies.</h3>
+                    <p>Robotic manipulators make movements with sub-micrometer precision and perform multiple tasks in parallel, critical improvements for enabling whole-brain neural recording.</p>
                 </Article>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -236,18 +232,17 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
 
                 <Image class="rounded-xl" src={Durations} alt="Automation durations"/>
                 <Article>
-                    <p>Automation is measurably faster than traditional methods. The red dot is the median duration of
-                        automated 2-probe electrophysiology insertion which is significantly lower than the median
-                        duration for manual insertions.</p>
+                    <p>Automation is measurably faster than traditional methods. The median duration of automated insertions (red dot) is significantly faster than the median
+                        duration for manual insertions (black dot).</p>
                 </Article>
             </div>
 
             <div class="basis-1/2 self-stretch">
                 <div class="sticky top-1/3">
                     <Article>
-                        <h2>The future of neuroscience is automation</h2>
-                        <h3>We are working with the Allen Institute to develop computer vision assisted systems to
-                            enable completely unattended surgery automation.</h3>
+                        <h2>The future is fully automated</h2>
+                        <h3>In collaboration with the Allen Institute we will develop computer vision assisted systems to
+                            enable unattended surgery.</h3>
                         <p>The reduction in human error and increase in efficiency will enable neuroscientists to scale
                             up
                             their work to new heights, unlocking studies and surgeries previously deemed impossible.</p>
@@ -291,18 +286,15 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
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                 <div class="sticky top-1/3">
                     <Article>
-                        <h2>Neuroscience for everyone</h2>
-                        <h3>Pinpoint is free software for everyone to use. Run it from a web browser, a desktop computer, or a handheld gaming console.</h3>
-                        <p>We teach and share the platform at various
-                            workshops and conferences.</p>
+                        <h2>Neuroscience is for everyone</h2>
+                        <h3>Pinpoint is free software available for everyone to use.</h3>
+                        <p>Run Pinpoint from a web browser, a desktop computer, or a handheld gaming console!</p>
+                        <p>Learn about Pinpoint and discover the platform at three workshops and conferences every year:</p>
                         <ul>
-                            <li>Society for Neuroscience
-                                Conference <a href="https://www.sfn.org/meetings/neuroscience-2022">2022</a>, <a
-                                        href="https://www.sfn.org/meetings/neuroscience-2023">2023</a>, <a
-                                        href="https://www.sfn.org/meetings/neuroscience-2024">2024</a>, and (soon) <a
-                                        href="https://www.sfn.org/meetings/neuroscience-2025">2025</a></li>
-                            <li><a href="https://alleninstitute.org/events/2024-neuropixels-and-openscope-workshop/">Allen
-                                Institute Neuropixels and OpenScope Workshop</a> 2023 and 2024</li>
+                            <li><a href="https://www.sfn.org/meetings/neuroscience-2025">Society for Neuroscience
+                                Conference</a></li>
+                            <li><a href="https://alleninstitute.org/events/2025-neuropixels-and-openscope-workshop/">Allen
+                                Institute Neuropixels and OpenScope Workshop</a></li>
                             <li><a href="https://www.ucl.ac.uk/neuropixels/training/2024-neuropixels-course">UCL
                                 Neuropixels Course</a></li>
                         </ul>
@@ -351,13 +343,13 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
                 <div class="sticky top-1/3">
                     <Article>
                         <h2>Fostering the next generation</h2>
-                        <h3>Pinpoint was developed with the help of a diverse group of undergraduate researchers.</h3>
+                        <p>Developing Pinpoint has been an opportunity for a diverse group of undergraduates to discover a passion for research, neuroscience, and 3D development.</p>
                         <ul>
-                            <li>Kenneth Yang</li>
-                            <li>Jasmine Schoch</li>
+                            <li>Kenneth Yang (WRF Fellow, Mary Gates Scholar)</li>
+                            <li>Jasmine Schoch (SURFiN Fellow)</li>
                             <li>Qiqi Liang</li>
                             <li>Selina Li</li>
-                            <li>Kai Nylund</li>
+                            <li>Kai Nylund (Mary Gates Scholar)</li>
                         </ul>
                     </Article>
                 </div>
@@ -392,8 +384,7 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
                     <h2>Built by everyone</h2>
                     <h3>Pinpoint is open-source software meaning anyone can review our code, report problems, and
                         submit changes.</h3>
-                    <p>The open nature of our code also ensures it will still be maintainable even after we stop
-                        developing it.</p>
+                    <p>The open nature of our code also ensures it will still be maintainable long after we achieve our main goals.</p>
                 </Article>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -423,7 +414,7 @@ const automationImporter = new GraphicsImporter(
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                 <Article>
                     <h2>Learn more about our projects</h2>
-                    <h3>See what else we've made and get in contact with us!</h3>
+                    <p>See what else we've made and get in contact with us!</p>
                 </Article>
             </div>
         </div>