further elaborate on remote attendance

Author: afeld

syllabus.md

@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ Letter grades for the entire course will be assigned as follows:
 
 ### Attendance
 
-Attending class is mandatory, but most importantly, important. Learning programming requires commitment from the part of the student and the skills are built out of practice. If you miss an experience in class, you miss an important learning moment and the class misses your contribution.
+Attending class is mandatory, but most importantly, important. Learning programming requires commitment from the part of the student and the skills are built out of practice. If you miss attending class in person, you miss an important learning moment and the class misses your contribution.
 
 Missing class counts as an absence, regardless of the reason or notifying the instructor(s) beforehand. Missing more than 20 minutes of a class session will be treated as an absence. The first absence is treated as a "freebie". Your final Attendance score will be calculated as:
 
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ $$\text{your_score} = \min(\text{maximum_score}, \text{number_of_classes_you_att
 
 If you do miss class, we trust that it's for a good reason. If you're sick, please use that freebie and stay home and rest.
 
-The course is designed for the in-person experience. Requests for viewing lectures remotely will be considered on a case-by-case basis. These will still count as an absence/freebie.
+Requests for viewing lectures remotely will be considered on a case-by-case basis. These will still count as an absence/freebie.
 
 You are responsible for getting caught up on what was covered in class. You may want to ask a classmate for notes.