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Author: meganelepalud-akeneo

content/news/2022.md

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 ### <span class="label label-news label-added">ADDED</span> Guided tutorials
 
-We created a “Guided tutorial” section to list all our new guided tutorials.  
+We created a “Guided tutorial” section to list all of our new guided tutorials.  
 In this section, you can filter tutorials per use case or feature.
 
 👉 Discover our [Guided tutorials](/tutorials/homepage.html) section
@@ -22,15 +22,15 @@ From November 2022, the product identifier value (pim_catalog_identifier attribu
 
 ### <span class="label label-news label-added">ADDED</span> Catalog for Apps
 
-We want to ease App development and configuration, and love to do both simultaneously.
+Catalogs for apps ease the process of app development and configuration.
 
-With the Catalogs, you can:
+With Catalogs, you can:
 - only retrieve the products you need
 - have less code to maintain if you already developed a UI
 - don’t have to master the PIM catalog structure anymore to provide a relevant filtering interface to your users
 - and spend less money on configuration UI by using an on-the-shelf solution we provide
 
-And **app users** are more autonomous by configuring their data selection from the Akeneo PIM UI and benefit from a consistent user experience.
+Additionally, **app users** are more autonomous by configuring their data selection from Akeneo PIM UI and benefit from a consistent user experience.
 
 👉 Learn more about [Catalogs for apps](/apps/catalogs.html) and discover our new [Catalogs endpoints](/api-reference-index.html#Catalogs)
 
@@ -39,11 +39,11 @@ And **app users** are more autonomous by configuring their data selection from t
 
 ### <span class="label label-news label-notice">NOTICE - ADDED</span> Product UUID
 
-A PIM used to contain one and only identification: the so-called field `identifier` (the only `pim_catalog_identifier` attribute of the whole product). In Serenity, this field value is the SKU (Stock Keeping Unit) of the product, but what if you need to identify your product with several product identifiers (SKU, EAN, GTIN,...)? Adding classic fields won't do the job: you need a kind of identifier field for each product. And how will you identify your product if its SKU has changed?
+Akeneo PIM used to contain one and only identification: the 'identifier' field (the only `pim_catalog_identifier` attribute of the whole product). In Serenity, this field value is the SKU (Stock Keeping Unit) of the product, but what if you need to identify your product with several product identifiers (SKU, EAN, GTIN...)? Adding classic fields won't do the job you need a more flexible identifier field for each product. And you still need a way to identify your product if its SKU has changed.
 
-That's the purpose of the brand-new product UUID feature.
+That's the purpose of the brand-new product UUID.
 
-But before making it happen, a product must have a **unique** and **immutable** way to identify it: that's why we introduced the product UUID (for Universally Unique Identifier).
+But before making it happen, a product must have a **unique** and **unalterable** way to identify it: that's why we introduced the product UUID, which stands for Universally Unique Identifier.
 
 👉 Learn more about [how to migrate from product identifiers to UUID](/getting-started/from-identifiers-to-uuid-7x/welcome.html) 
 

content/news/whats-next.md

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 ## Product data mapping 
 
 You discovered our `catalogs for apps` feature in the [October 2022 section]().  
-As we want to give app users the best experience and reduce the development cost for you, app developers, we are working on a mapping interface to avoid you to develop it. 
+As we want to give app users the best experience and reduce the development cost for you, app developers, we are working on a mapping interface so you won't have to develop it from scratch. 
 
 To do so, in **December 2022**, we will launch an **alpha developer version** of our product data mapping feature.